Tonsui Unagai (Third Captain)

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Tonsui Unagai (Third Captain)

Post by DewBunny on Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:13 pm

Basic Information

Name: Tonsui Unagai

Age: 21 actually 483

Gender: Male

Division: Third

Seat: Captain


Personality: (How your character acts)

(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Shikai: 35
Bankai: 45

Speed: 30
Shikai: 35
Banka: 45

Accuracy: 10
Shikai: 10
Bankai: 10

Stamina: 20
Shikai: 20
Bankai: 20

Zanpaktou Information

Zanpaktou Name: Koodori Sousei ~ Dancing Twins

Zanpaktou Looks:

Zanpaktou Description: the twins individually named Enkai (black sword) and Tsuki (white sword) control forces such as horizontal and vertical push and pull

Released Zanpaktou Description: Tsuki controls upwards motion as well as downward motion enabling heavier cutting as well as lighter sword play +5 speed and strength. Enkai Controls horizontal force manipulation. this allows her to send waves of force at enemies. these collide with any object and focus on it (swords can block this if the opposer has equal or greater strength than the user.)

As well as basic abilities this duo has dances. each dance uses more specific abilities the twins hold.


Ichiban Buntan Mai, Aki (literally first Equinox dance, Autumn) User starts spinning and flinging pressure Enkai causes massive wind movement while Tsuki creates downward force or upward force creating an either knock you off your feet force or a tornado.

Niban Buntan Mai, Izumi (Literally second Equinox Dance, Spring) User Stabs Enkai into the ground causing a massive ripple outwards in all directions from the user. these are micro strikes similar to the pressure swings enkai emits regularly

Geshiten no mai (literally Dance of the summer solstice) Geshiten no mai creates a Sine wave at the exact frequency of an opponents zanpaktou causing it to shake violently. this is accomplished by using enkai's pressure attack in conjunction with fluctuating tsuki's up and down forces. the rate of fluctuation controls frequency and vibration.

Touji no Mai (literally Dance of the Winter Solstice) the winter solstice causes the opposite of the winter solstice making Tsuki vibrate at super high speeds similar to that of seele schnieder


First ballad, Spring's Transition There are four ballads total all of which combine two dances into one and only with seasons that follow or precede each other. Spring's transition causes the same effects as Geshitan no mai and Niban Buntan mai, Izumi at once. using Niban buntan enkai creates a pressure bubble and Tsuki vibrates the small forces into sine waves. when the bubble expands sharply the earth beneath it undergoes enough pressure to form a one foot high ripple. the sine waves givin off by this are a massive scale Niban Buntan which causes swords (including the user's) to vibrate for one post (accuracy -5) 75 feet in each direction

Second Ballad, Summer's heat Of the four ballads this is considered the strongest and is the physical manifestation of the summer's heat. using microwaves tonsui will superheat objects around himself. when his swords use this they receive counter forces which keep the swords still and cool to the touch. sword metal gets hot on the first post and if continued to a second post may melt. this is easily countered by making Tonsui have to move his swords. if Tonsui moves his swords the technique ends and objects cool within the same posts 1 post warm up 1 post cool down etc 50 feet focused in front of him.

Third Ballad, Autumn's Preparation Autumns preparation causes a drawing force pulling small debris to the user. the debree it then vibrated at seele schnieder speeds making them mini chainsaws. once debris is collected the user spins sending the debris in all directions and causing a huge swirling mass of blades can only be used twice. Objects have a range of 40 feet away from the user

Fourth Ballad, Winter's Frost causes a huge outward force. this force causes all objects in the range of it to freeze over with the exception of the user. Due to the fact that it requires tons of energy to counteract the molecules normal movement this technique can only be used once per fight. 40 feet from user, all directions

Zanpaktou Release Phrase: Mai ~ Dance

Released Zanpaktou Looks:

Zanpaktou Spirit:

Zanpaktou Realm: A small moonlight island

Bankai Information ~ YinYang Teishi ~ Yinyang's apprentice
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only)

Bankai Description: user's dominate hand gains a large broad sword and a large fan in their opposite hand. The fan grants the user the ability to summon devastating winds and slashing pressures. the sword retains its ability to control up and down forces to a slightly larger scale. +10 strength and speed. Coupled with all of this is a passive ability to control time around the user. this is very mild and only controls it's speed. it basically causes the user's senses and thoughts to speed up but their body remains stuck in regular time giving them an almost permanent Fight or flight response. this can be used any time the user feels necessary to allow the user the ability to semi-plan his/her moves in advance.

If this ability is over used the user will experience a 'downer effect' that include a drop in stamina by 5 and a slow in speed by 10. this ability can be used in a one off one on manner up to five times without harm to the user, past that the effects kick in. after five more uses this technique fails altogether and the effects become permanent for the remainder of the battle/topic.

Opera of the Ages

The Opera of the Ages splits Tonsui's body into Four Seperate people. Each person has a blade that matches a season and can preform that season's ballad. they are Summer, Autumn, Winter, and Spring. Each person's blade carries the ability to use small scale versions of the ballads IE Summer, fire. Autumn, slicing winds. Winter, freezing touch. Spring, explosive force. This Ability stays in effect for five posts twice per battle with a four post cooldown during the four post cooldown the user cannot use bankai or shikai. this also has major exhaustion factors

Bankai Looks:


Kyuukyokukai Information

Full Zanpaktou Name: Shitenno no Kengen (Lit. "Manifestation of the Four Heavenly Kings of Buddhism")

Release Looks: Tonsui's Zanpaktous disperse and reform into Four large beasts.

Release Description: Each of the four beasts holds one of the four directions and one of the four Seasons. the beasts are Genbu (a large tortoise) Suzaku (Red Pheonix) Byakko (White Tiger) Seiryuu (Dragon) Each animal holds individual seasons that are related to their directions.

  • Tortoise = North, Winter
  • White Tiger = West, Fall
  • Pheonix = South, Summer
  • Dragon = East, Spring

Individual descriptions of the Beasts

Genbu Being a large tortoise this is the slowest of the beasts but the strongest of the forces. He has the ability to stomp and send freezing Reishi out. this reishi is free molded by Tonsui through Genbu to form anything (within reason) Tonsui can think of out of ice. Genbu has a hard exterior he can use to block physical attacks easily. He is weak against Flame attacks and due to layer of reishi charged Ice over his shell can reflect most kidou with the exception of Flame Kidou he is similar to Sanbi in that his tail, which is made of ice, extends twice his body leangth and is capable of strong slamming techniques. it can also fling ice projectiles from the tip which regenerate once per post.

Genbu's Stats (60 SP)

Strength: 25

Speed: 5

Accuracy: 15

Stamina: 15

Suzaku Suzaku is a large Red pheonix capable of Fire techniques. It has the highest speed and the least physical strength. it can preform diving attacks and blast fire from it's mouth as well as freely manipulate *it's own fire* to whatever Tonsui deems necessary. It is weak to Ice and Water techniques and Kidou and if restrained mid air will crash to the ground (Binding Kidou)

Suzaku's Stats (60)





Byakko Byakko takes the form of a white tiger and has Wind control. he can use the wind to propel his attacks and even increase cutting power making him the most devastating of the four. he can control wind through vocalizations such as roars and growls as well as swiping his massive paw through the air. he is weak to Physical attacks and earth Kidou as these are the only things his wind cannot affect.

Byakko's Stats (60)

Strength: 15

Speed: 20

Accuracy: 15

Stamina: 10

Seiryuu Seiryuu is a large dragon capable of strong force manipulation. though unable to fly his large wings hold the ability to repel most kidou with the exception of Lightning Kidou. he is ineffective against Binding Kidou and cannot breath fire making him the physical attacker of the bunch. his tail has a plated segment on the end capable of strong bashing techniques.

Seiryuu's stats (60)





Kyuukyokukai Stats

Strength: 50

Speed: 50

Accuracy: 10

Stamina: 25

Kyukyokukai Abilities

Ability One: Masshibuatakku (Massive Attack)

Description: This allows Tonsui to use his Ballads on a massive scale through the use of the Beasts.

All ranges for the ballads double and can only be used once per Kyuu release

First ballad, Spring's Transition 150 feet in each direction.
Second Ballad, Summer's heat 100 feet focused in front of him.
Third Ballad, Autumn's Preparation Objects have a range of 80 feet away from the user.
Fourth Ballad, Winter's Frost 80 feet from user, all directions.


Kido Information

1. Restrain (塞, sai?) — Locks a target's arms in place behind their back.
4. Crawling Rope (這縄, hainawa?) — An energy rope entangles a target's arms.
9. Strike (撃, geki?) — Engulfs a target in red light, completely paralyzing them. "Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!"
30. Beak-Stab Triple-Flash (嘴突三閃, shitotsusansen?) — After using kido energy to draw out an equilateral triangle, the targets' arms and waist are pinned down and rendered immobile.
39. Arc Shield (円閘扇, enkosen?) — Summons a shield of energy to block opponents' attacks.
58. Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows (摑趾追雀, kakushitsuijaku?) — Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude. "Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain."
61. Six Rods Prison of Light (六杖光牢, rikujōkōrō?) — Summons six thin, but wide, beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. Referred to as "Six Rod Light Restraint" in the English manga and "Six Bars of Light" in some of the games. "Carriage of Thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six!"
62. Hundred Stepped Rails (百歩欄干, hyapporankan?) — A rod formed of energy is thrown towards the target before it disintegrates into numerous short rods which are used to pin the target to the surroundings and render them immobile.
63. Winding Binding Chain (鎖条鎖縛, sajō sabaku?) — The target is wrapped from the neck down in a thick chain.
75. Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars (五柱鉄貫, gochūtekkan?) — Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars to pin a target to the ground. "Walls of ironsand, a priestly pagoda, glowing ironclad fireflies. Standing upright, silent to the end."
77. Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air (天挺空羅, tenteikūra?) — Transmits messages to anyone within a specific area. In addition to reciting the spell, the user must draw specific markings on their arms, which are animated by the spell to convey the messages. "Black and white net. Twenty-two bridges, sixty-six crowns and belts. Footprints, distant thunder, sharp peak, engulfing land, hidden in the night, sea of clouds, blue line. Form a circle and fly though the heavens."
81. Splitting Void (斷空, dankū?) — Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89.
99, Part 1. Restrict (禁, kin?) — Binds the arms of a target with spiritual fabric and iron shafts.
99, Part 2. Great Seal (卍禁, bankin?) — This spell's effects are divided into three "songs":
First Song: Halting Fabric (初曲・止繃, shokyoku: shiryū?) covers a target from head to toe with a binding cloth.
Second Song: Hundred Linked Bolts (弐曲・百連閂, nikyoku: hyakurensan?) stabs the target with numerous thick needles.
Final Song: Great Seal of 10,000 Forbiddings (終曲・卍禁太封, shūkyoku: bankin taihō?) smashes the target with an immense boulder

Destcructive spells

1. Thrust (衝, shō?) — Pushes the target away from the caster.
4. White Lightning (白雷, byakurai?) — Fires a concentrated bolt of white lightning from the caster's forefinger.
31. Shot of Red Fire (赤火砲, shakkahō?, Red Flame Cannon in the English dub) — Fires a ball of red fire at a target. "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
33. Blue Fire, Crash Down (蒼火墜, sōkatsui?, Pale Fire Crash in the English dub) — Fires a column of blue fire at a target in a similar manner to 31, but over a wider area and with more power. "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."
54. Abolishing Flames (廃炎, haien?) — Fires a blast of purple fire that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.
58. Whirling Tempest (闐嵐, tenran?) — A widening tornado-like blast is fired towards the target.
63. Thunder Roar Cannon (雷吼炮, raikōhō?) — Fires a massive wave of yellow lightning at a target. "Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"
73. Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down (双蓮蒼火墜, sōren sōkatsui?) — Essentially a doubled version of #33, this spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety. "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens."
88. Flying Dragon Striking, Heaven-Shaking, Lightning Cannon (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, hiryūgekizokushintenraihō?) — Fires a massive blast of spiritual energy in a fashion similar to a laser.
90. Black Coffin (黒棺, kurohitsugi?) — Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe. Aizen notes that the spell only reached a third of its destructive potential the one time he uses it, indicating that the spell would be far more damaging at full power. Its appearance and function is reminiscent of a common magician's trick, as well as certain torture devices used during the Spanish Inquisition.

Misc. spells

These spells are not explicitly stated to be in one category or the other.

White Crawl (白伏, hakufuku?) — Although not seen actually using it, Momo Hinamori apparently uses this spell while imprisoned to knock out a guard and destroy everything within a certain radius of herself. The anime suggests that it is a binding spell, but doesn't number it.
Mirror Door (鏡門, kyōmon?) — Tōshirō Hitsugaya used this to seal Momo Hinamori's hospital room. It creates a glass-like barrier which is difficult to break from the outside, but quite simple to break from the inside.
Reverse Demon (反鬼, hanki sosai?) — This technique nullifies an opponent's kidō by hitting them with a perfectly opposite surge of energy. Yoruichi uses this against Soifon's shunkō.
Stone Wave (石波, seppa?) — Ganju's signature technique turns whatever it is aimed at into sand. It has a variety of uses, ranging from cushioning a fall to creating quick escape routes.
Temporal Stasis (時間停止, jikanteishi?) — A forbidden spell used by Tessai along with kūkanten'i. The actual effect of the spell isn't elaborated on.
Spatial Displacement (空間転位, kūkanten'i?) — A forbidden spell used by Tessai with jikanteishi to teleport a specified portion of space from one point to another, transporting even other active kidō spells.

Name: Shiju no Saimon

Type: (Bakudo-Binding

Number: Unknown probably close to 90

Element: Barrier

Incantation: Brothers in arms, Never contemplating retreat. Blue bolt, White bolt, Black bolt, Red bolt. Sinking into the sea together to redeem themselves. (Effect 1)"Ryubi no Jomon" (armband shield) "Koko no Jomon" (wooden gear) "Kigai no Jomon" (honeycomb) "Hoyoku no Jomon" (Cross with wings) "Shiju no Saimon" (Wings close to form overhead halo)

Description: user forms a wall of large wooden planks which form a wall in front of the user. once the wall is in place the user speaks the incantation. upon reaching the words Ryubi no jomon the wall is reinforced drastically with more Kido Planks forming a large shield the shape of the gotei thirteen armbands. the user continues speaking the incantation from here.

for every 'Jomon' spoken another large object appears the shield being followed by the large wooden gear being followed by a huge honeycomb structure followed by a large cross shape with wings. after the user says the words 'Shiju no Saimon' the wings on the fourth object close in forming a large halo over the ensnared person.

with the four objects in place a large cubic barrier forms around the ensnared person or hollow. which is inescapable save for an opening through the wooden gear only the user can open.

Drawbacks: Long incantation and assembly ensure this is a hard spell to use on the quick.

History and RP Sample

History: Tonsui grew up seperated from Sousuke. His sector of rukongai was considered on of the best to be in yet he still lived in squalor until he came to the Seireitei. His time at the academy was short and his station at the world of the living long. Tonsui carved out a living in the world of the living eventually training in and achieving bankai. by the time he was finally called back to the world of the living his brother Sousuke Unagai had become Captain of the tenth division. Tonsui still had nothing to show for himself other than being a third seat officer.

Seeking personal glory more than anything he took an assignment to Heuco Mundo to clear Hollows from the area in the hopes of thinning adjuchas and vasto lorde populaces in the world of the living. After a while he had defeated well over two hundred Adjuchas and three vasto lordes before returning to Seireitei. his life progressed slowly back in seireitei while he rose in rank from third seat to Vice Captain.

After the vaizards left the casualties were counted and Sousuke was among the dead. feeling a sense of pride over his lost brother he took Sousuke's position as squad ten captain where he is today.

RP Sample:
Kisuke sat atop Madara Uchiha's head at the valley of the end. "I suppose it's time to ask." he muttered bringing his hand to his lips and extending his thumb to meet his teeth. He bit down drawing blood from his thumb and brought his bleeding appendage to his forehead drawing a bloodseal. Inside his head the scenery cleared in an instant and it fell white and a single figure stood amongst the rippling whiteness of his thoughts. he materialized next to this man who bore the Rin`negan and a necklace of six Tomoe chained to a piece of leather.

his voice was soft and stable echoing from his body with a surreal strength about it. "Why am I here? Shunsui held the contract not you." Kisuke received a sharp glare which felt as though it could have made Kyuubi himself run in terror. "I received this contract from Shunsui of Amegakure. He sounded panicked in his letter so i would hazard a guess he is either dead or will be soon. However...Rikudou Sennin, Shuuhei. I would like a little chat with you." Kisuke's arms crossed and his chakra flared as Shuuhei shifted his weight from one foot to the other.

"Understandable you would be curious of your origins, as anyone would. The problem lies in your eagerness to trust me." Shuuhei's hand flew forward to Kisuke's chest. And his tone dropped to the deadly end of it's range. "You're a bit new to my contract fool so I'll clue you in. I'm not here to be your friend i am here because some one put my soul into a summoning contract."

Kisuke took a step closer pushing Shuuhei's arm back so his hand rested on both of their chests. His chakra flared and the room they stood in turned black with his rage. "I'm not a child and I would appreciate you treating me better than such." his voice was subtle but near the levels Shuuhei had used minutes ago. "Now then, I do believe I said I wanted to chat."

Shuuhei smirked as the room rippled once more. This time it grew scenery and trees. a small house in the distance rushed forward and grew to be a mansion. the doors flung open and three men walked out of the mansion followed by a small girl. the man in the middle of the pack bore the rin`negan and instantly his features became visible. his hair was black and spiky and his face soft and peaceful on the surface. Shuuhei spoke once more to Kisuke. "You wanted to chat about the lines of Uchiha and Senju." the boy on Shuuhei's left opened his eyes revealing the sharingan.

Kisuke was a little caught off guard and walked towards him. Shuuhei's voice issued from the Rin`negan wielder and thundered through the area "Daisuke." he shouted. The Uchiha nodded and took off running and gripping a sword. in one fell swoop he swung the sword leveling a good sized area of trees before leaping over their falling trunks. Daisuke followed through blowing a huge fireball and burning it to a crisp. he landed amidst the burning husks shadowed in a fiery chakra. Kisuke recognized to horrible chakra immediately. Behind him now Shuuhei muttered a name, "Kiyoshi..." The young man standing next to him now leaped and formed several handseals before a torrential rain came over the area dousing the flames and his brother.

Daisuke turned to his brother and growled. "Dammit Kiyoshi can't ya see i was trying to look cool here!?" Shuuhei smirked and the rain stopped as Kiyoshi landed. "Maybe if you were actually cool you wouldn't have to work so hard huh?" Kiyoshi sounded peaceful and a bit laid back as he spoke. he smiled flicking his dark black hair back while it was wet. He turned back to his father and the small girl behind him. "Yusa, you ok?" Kiyoshi smiled glancing around Shuuhei as his younger sister smiled at him. She nodded and Shuuhei spoke to Kisuke again.

"You're ancestors," He stated. "Daisuke, you're Uchiha ancestor. he would go on to form the great Uchiha clan. My decision only affirmed a bloody hatred for his brother. and Kiyoshi, the Senju leader. He was the Man to whom i entrusted all of my dreams. His thought was that love and understanding would lead to true peace. He was the idealistic choice for my successor. However that choice would turn my sons against each other." Shuuhei walked around the scene which had paused for his explanation. his palm settled on the youngest of the three, Yusa. "You may be wondering who this pretty girl is." Shuuhei smiled nostalgically. "Yusa was my daughter. Shortly after this day she would be asked to marry the leader of a clan in what would become Amegakure. She would go on to create the line which made my own prodigy. Nagato."

Kisuke's eyes widened in surprise as Shuuhei spoke. the scenery shifted again to Amegakure. "You wanted the full story. Right? Well here it is. My three children were scattered in their individual missions to revive my dream. As they grew up and raised their respective children time passed and the five great nations were established. the hatred born from my decision led to the day Uchiha Madara was born." the scenery flickered to the Valley of the End. "Madara and Hirashima, The greatest of their time in their respective clans, They fought here over politics. they each wanted to be the Hokage and once more a battle ensued over who was the strongest of my children.

Kisuke nodded and the scenery shifted to a dark room above Amegakure. A man in a red swirl mask stood speaking softly to a Rin`negan user. Shuuhei picked up where he left off. "After all of that Madara went on to take command of Nagato and use him towards his own ends. We all know where this led too. But now from what Shunsui has told me i have a third prodigy. Dark Yamikaze." Shuuhei's eyes narrowed in on the Rin`negan user near the masked man. His attention turned to Konan behind Pein. "One way or another She bore his child. My legacy lived on through this girl." Kisuke watched the scenery flash again to reveal Konan holding twins. "One of these two would father Dark, the other would father Shunsui." Kisuke stood in utter silence watching these scenes play out.

Shuuhei turned to Kisuke once more. "As I'm sure you are aware there were two more of your ancestors who fought. Naruto Uzumaki and Sasuke Uchiha. this cataclysmic battle made your line possible. Sasuke went on to father three children of his own before he passed." The scenery flickered hazily to a dark bedroom where the sounds of babies crying could be heard along with the soft voice of a mother attempting to quiet them. "Your line start with one of these three. Although Sasuke did his very best to shield them from the darkest of the Uchiha secrets when he passed they delved into his history. they found information on their greatest powers and their darkest consequences."

"In the end though none of them had the power to awaken the Mangekyou Sharingan thanks to their father. This line continued for years after and after no more than one generation you were conceived. Seven were born and only six were Uchiha. You apparently were the odd man out. Having no Sharingan your brothers exiled you with the name Senju as a reminder that you could never be one of them. Shuuhei waited as this clicked in Kisuke's mind. "I'm afraid the world has a twisted sense of humor. For granting me the power of a god it cursed my line to forever kill themselves off. Uchiha killed it's brothers and sisters and Senju helped them along."

The scenery shifted to the outskirts of Konoha. "This is where most of it happened." As Shuuhei spoke the sun drifted quickly back across the sky seeming to drag time back with it. Bodies piled up and rotting corpses regrew flesh and muscle. in the midst of all this battles were being waged every day and every night bodies were added to this pile. "This is probably your fate as well. You and your brother will fight. and at some point you may even win." Kisuke for the first time took a long look at Shuuhei's robe. Shuuhei looked down at his robe then back up to Kisuke's stare. "Recognize it?" He asked.

Kisuke nodded still watching closely. Shuuhei spoke once more. "I'm a little surprised you would recognize it. I organized this with Shunsui." the Robe Shuuhei wore bore a small circle over his chest. in the circle a flowery coat of arms from a Pai Sho piece named, The White Lotus. "For quite a few years now we have been working in the background. Underground stuff like akatsuki. After my last little prodigy's dealing with Akatsuki I decided it was time to intervene. Dark it seems has become part of Akatsuki and I'm afraid i can not allow that to go unchallenged." Shuuhei turned towards Konoha once more. "My sons have fought long enough and i do believe it's time i ended this." He said staring blankly at the sixth head on Hokage Mountain. "Naruto." he murmured

Kisuke's mind was almost a blur while Shuuhei spoke. he had recieved word of that organization but had no clue if it was real or myth. "Shuuhei, do you still believe Kiyoshi was the best choice?" Kisuke appeared lost in thought at this point. "The best? Maybe not the best but the clearest choice. If i had chosen Daisuke and followed the birthright there would have been slaughter in the name of peace. The fighting that would have ensued from that would have put into question who exactly would have been strong enough to rule that world."

"Kiyoshi and Yusa on the other hand. They were the best choices. Kiyoshi was strong but believed in understanding all the people. Yusa was too young when I left so I entrusted her to her brother. Upon my death Daisuke attacked Kiyoshi in rage. Kiyoshi of course repelled his brother without killing him and a horrible blood feud was started." Kisuke nodded thoughtfully. "Unfortunately my time is up here so I will speak to you again soon." Shuuhei gently faded from Kisuke's thoughts which rippled softly back to a dull gray. "We will speak again soon enough." he muttered.

Kisuke returned to this area a few days later questions burning in his mind. "We'll try something different this time." Kisuke formed a few handseals and a clone appeared in front of him. the clone bit his thumb and brought the blood to his chest drawing an eight point eternal star. As the clone finished the ring around that seal the clones eyes went blank, as though it had died, before flickering a royal purple and revealing the Rin`negan. "Shuuhei, I need to know now. What exactly is the Order of the White Lotus?" Kisuke looked to the clone who seemed lost in thought.

"The Order was something entrusted to me. Long ago. They resolved huge threats from behind the scenes with secret Militia. Kisuke nodded and looked to the water which Shuuhei had begun staring at. he reached down and touched the water which collected in a small valley in the top of the statue. The rippling water took shape and colors similar to a tv screen and began playing out a scene. an army robed in purple with the same white lotus shuuhei bore over their shoulders fought through a great city.

"In the darkest of the world's hours we rise to resolve these complications. Through time we've weathered the toughest of battles and if you look at the bottom of this waterfall. you'll see we were here when Hirashima and Madara fought." Kisuke nodded but pointedly brought Shuuhei back to the topic. "You still have not answered what they are today." Kisuke said staring deeply into the puddle which showed a blazing comet reddening the skies as the order fought.

"The Order now, the one Shunsui was grandmaster of, works behind the scene to try and clear up conflicts before they blossom to full-blooded wars." Shuuhei looked up from the puddle at Kisuke. "I can give you the names of a few of the members now. The ones Shuneui told me of anyway. Unagai, Sousuke. He is the second Grandmaster of this generation. His brother Tonsui is his pupil. Kyuushi Shuuhei is the third Grandmaster but from what i have heard she has been attacked. There are many members spanning the globe but not many know they exist anymore." Shuuehi sighed heavily and the puddle darkened. "Yamikaze, Dark..."

"Years ago, at the start of the fourth ninja war...Shuuhei there was talk about your legacy." Kisuke looked to the other man. "Dark things concerning you were said." Shuuhei's face seemed lost in thought. "Things were done that you could barely comprehend Kisuke." Shuuhei's voice dropped it's tone before he continued.

"In my time the world feared one thing. a monster. similar in it's qualities to Kyuubi but more devestating than all. Juubi." Kisuke's face reflected utter shock as shuuhei spoke. "In order to break this monster of it's destructive capabilities i sealed it within myself. I became the vessel for it's chakras. The moon you see above us at night is the truest reflection of it's power. There is only one place on earth that still bears the mark of that behemoths wrath." Shuuhei touched the water again showing a huge over veiw of Amegakure.

"This is where the sealing occurred. Heh used to be a lake here." Shuuhei smiled briefly as the scene seemed to rewind backwards endlessly. Finally it stopped and Shuuhei dipped his finger into it before touching Kisuke's forehead and muttering something Kisuke couldn't understand. Shuuhei stood up and said, "Right lets go back now." With a single step he fell into the water gripping Kisuke as he went. Both fell backwards in time landing on a small island in the middle of a huge lake.

"This is where it happened, more specifically, when it happened." Shuuhei pointed to a large figure quite a bit away from them. water rose and fell violently around the figure as a man carrying a staff dodged devastating swipes of it's claws. After a while Kisuke watched the man jump up and tamp nine of Juubi's tails with his staff. at this point things got interesting. "The seals were put in place and my math had been done correctly and here was the outcome." The beast roared in either pain or anger as the seals glowed on it's body.

Kisuke seemed intrigued as the sealing activated. an all too familiar statue rose from the depths of the water. "Gedo mazo..." Kisuke muttered. Shuuhei smiled and nodded. "My greatest work. Watch" Kisuke watched as shuuhei's younger self landed beneath the statue. Sthe statue came to life at that moment and a large black rod shot from it into shuuhei's body. Shuuhei winced sitting next to Kisuke. "Even now i still remember the sheer pain of those rods." The mouth of the statue opened and ten dragons flew out of it's maw as ten people appeared on the fingers of the statue.

"Who are-" Kisuke was cut off as shuuhei started again. "The original Akatsuki. Red Dawn was originally my plan to rid the world of Juubi. That ide a became perverted when Madara came along. Those you see on Gedo Mazo now became the original six paths of Rikudou sennin." Kisuke continued watching as the dragons slammed into Juubi. An echoing scream came from the statue. Shuuhei's body flexed dangerously as the chakra from the beast poured into his body.

After a few hours Juubi's body fell to the ground lifeless. Shuuhei's body fell limp and the statue's Ten men fell off. Four of the men simply disintegrated from the act while the other six were simply dead. The rods embedded in Shuuhei's back branched off embedding themselves in the bodies of of the six men. The scenery flickered once to a few hours later when all six paths stood and surrounded the body of Juubi. Shuuhei stood to the side literally glowing with chakra. all six of the paths laid hands on Juubi's body which blackened drawing in water and surrounding earth. Shuuhei himself stood and began walking away while the body of Juubi gently rose into the air.

The scene faded and Kisuke found himself on the statues once more. "'s true, Akatsuki means to revive Juubi." Shuuhei nodded solemnly. "The order is in place to prevent it. but it seems my line is doomed to be entangled within Juubi's destiny for eternity." Shuuhei sigh and looked up to the sky to see the moon's outline cast against the night sky. "Kisuke you can't allow it to happen. I'll be in touch for now." Kisuke nodded and shuuhei's clone dispersed leaving Kisuke with more questions then he could comprehend.

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Re: Tonsui Unagai (Third Captain)

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Re: Tonsui Unagai (Third Captain)

Post by Kaji-Kanto on Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:10 pm

Update stats & Change division number to 3rd.

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Re: Tonsui Unagai (Third Captain)

Post by Lee on Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:02 am

This isn't vice captain level, if that is what you were still going for.

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