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Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:06 am

Basic Information

Name: Yousei Murakami

Age: 973, looks like 17

Gender: Male

Division: 8th

Seat: Vice-Captain

Looks:
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Personality: Calm. Mostly like Hitsugaya, but is much harder to anger. Kind and patient to others. Likes to admire nature, also spends much time there. Considered wise and helpful. Respects persons of higher rank, respects traditions, but might question or disobey them if he thinks they aren't right. He's not very expresive, may looks slow, but it doesn't mean he's really slow. Intelligent, forgiving, dreammy, might even be lazy. Dislikes bad emotions and niose. Empathical (has empathy).

Stats

95 Points for Vice-Captain:

Strength: 10

Speed: 45
Shikai 50

Dexterity: 50
Bankai 60

Stamina 45
Shikai 50
Bankai 55

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Yozora (nightsky)

Zanpakuto Looks: Katana with silverish blade. Hilt grey and guard is shaped like two crescent moons connected by a moonstone.

Zanpakuto Description: Nothing special without being release, apart from the moonstone on the guard. Moonstone reacts to spiritual energy and shines brighter when its level is increasing.

Released Zanpakuto Description: After Zanpakuto is released to shikai form, it allows user to do certain techniques:

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Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: 8th Squad's Lieutenant

Current Spritual Pressure: 72?

Name Of Techn: Reisuitai (Soul Weakening) - Shikai Technique

Tech Skill Level: Advanced

Small Summary: This technique mixes both Dimensional and Spirit type abilities of my Zanpakuto. Simply put it's a reishi protectile negatively charged. When it touches any living or spiritual being, it takes away some of their spiritual energy and so weakens them. Another special thing about this protectile is that it's transdimensional. It constantly changes dimensions it is traveling through, so it's nearly impossible to block it and quite difficult to counter it, unless with another dimensional ability, spiritual energy based attacks/defences or kido. Dodging it might be the best way to avoid drain of spiritual energy.
The protectile can be countered with kido (or kido ranked attacks) 30th and above.

Now:
It drains exactly 2 Stamina in Shikai and 3 in Bankai.
Can be used once a turn and uses same amount of stamina in Shikai, but only 2 Stamina in Bankai.

Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: 8th Squad's Lieutenant

Current Spritual Pressure: 75?

Name Of Techn: Shinkirou (Mirage)

Tech Skill Level: Advanced

Small Summary: This is dimensional ability that Yousei can use by calling Yozora's spirit out from his inner into the outside world, it's like partially releasing his Zanpakuto or in other words Zanpakuto materialization. This ability can also be used in Shikai and Bankai.
This ability allows Yousei's spiritual body itself become transdimensional for a moment. During that moment some lows of nature don't apply for his body. Meaning he can make sudden movement's that are against any laws of physics, or avoid being hit by a bullet by making it pass through him. This moment of being transdimensional is short, because Yousei can't survive in other dimensions more than that. Also, he doesn't fully go into other dimensions, as he's still partially here and there, which makes this technique unable to counter dimensional techniques, spiritual techniques, long-effect-time techniques and some of reiatsu based attacks, which also includes most of kido.

This has 3 posts cooldown normally and only 2 posts cooldown in Bankai.
Kido it can totally ignore are up to 30th and it can partially counter kido up 50th, but they would still effect. Kido from 51th to 100th cannot be countered. Drains 3 stamina.


Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: Lieutenant of 8th

Current Spritual Pressure: 84

Name Of Techn: Reihiketsu (Spiritual Negation)

Tech Skill Level: Advanced

Small Summary: If Mirage is a Dimensional ability, then this one would be its Spiritual sister-ability. Its meant for countering spiritual based attacks, but doesn't work against anything more physical.
Yousei would release his quite extraordinary spiritual energy together with Yozora. As their energies mixes, it looks like white aura with black textures. The aura is capable of negating any other spritual energy that comes in contact with it. If an attack has high reiatsu, the shield will break after negating it partially. Kido ranked attacks up to 40 can be fully negated at lowest stamina cost, up to 60 can be negated by half at the normal cost, up to 80 can be weakened by 15 kido ranks at bigger cost and up to 90 can be weakened only by 10 ranks by high cost.

Can be used without fully releasing Shikai (Just as Mirage). Has 3-5 post cooldown and drains 4-7 stamina (considering attack it blocked).


Name of Character: Yousei Murakami

Current Rank: Lieutenant of 8th

Current Spritual Pressure: 84

Name Of Techn: Hinotama (Falling Star)

Tech Skill Level: Expert

Small Summary: Hinotama is the only destructive technique Yousei has ever learned from Yozora. Yet its power is something to rival. Yousei would raise Yozora's blade pointing it to the sky and then release a huge amount of reiatsu. Soon after that, he'll start gathering his or any other spiritual energy, which is in his current area, at the tip of his blade, right above him. At this state he would be quite vulnerable, but he'd do his best not to get interrupted, even if he had to release his bankai. When enough spiritual energy is gathered, it takes a form of ball with incredible density of spiritual particles and then can be released in two ways. By swinging Yozora, Yousei can release it as a wave, or if he uses a stabbing movement, he can shoot the attack like a cannon, like a falling star. Destructive power of this can reach the power of 89th Hadou. Requires 1 post of preparation and gathering. Has 7 post cooldown.

Stat increase:
+5 Speed;
+5 Stamina.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Terasu Okuchou Hatsu, Yozora!" (Shine on people's hearts, Nightsky!)

Released Zanpakuto Looks: Whole sword becomes black, hilt and guard too. Blade's color becomes a picture of nightsky (black, or dark blue, with many tiny stars shinning). Only thing that doesn't change is moonstone.

Zanpakuto Spirit:
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Zanpakuto Realm: It's a valley in the mountains. In the valley, there is a black as abyss lake and in the middle of it an isle. Lake is always in tense mist and has many huge lotus floating in it. In this valley there's always night and sky is dark, but bright at the same time because of insane number of stars marking it. In the isle is a little shrine which is residence of my Zanpakuto spirit.


Bankai Information

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Bankai Name: Kyoutendouchi Yozora (Astounding/World-shaking Nightsky)

Bankai Description: As the moonstone on Yozora's guard shines according to reiatsu level, Yousei increases his reiatsu level very high, until light from the stone reaches it's limit. Then moonstone shatters into thousands of pieces and scatters all over the area. As this happens, sky turns dark with many stars shinning and ground becomes like mirror, reflecting the sky.

Bankai makes Yousei able to summon certain stars, which allows him to use his Bankai techniques:
1. Star of Mind - Yozora's blade begins to shine (if you can say shine) dark/black color.
Bankai technique - Maboroshi (Dream/Illusion). Maboroshi is an illusion technique, it can effect up to 3 persons when my character is Lieutenant and up to 5 when he's Captain. When this technique is activated, Yozora begins to burn in dark flames that cover a certain area in which all targets are; these flames are my spiritual energy and are used to effect targets' mind. Illusion allows Yousei to fool his opponents by changing surroundings, mostly everything, even opponent's body or zanpakuto. Still, this illusion is escapable, here's a table to show what rank I must be and how long I can hold someone in illusions:
My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - 1 post 2 posts
Lieutenant 1 post 2 posts3 posts
3rd Seat 2 posts 3 posts4 posts
Lower than 3rd3 posts 4 posts5 posts
This technique has 10 post cooldown and drains 3 stamina points at activation and 1 point per each post the target is under illusions.

2. Star of Soul - Yozora's blade begins to shine white.
Bankai technique - Kokoro Karidasu (Heart Borrow). This technique is clearly meant against Shinigami, though it can work against Vaizards and Arrancar too. When Yousei uses Heart Borrow, Yozora enters opponent realm of soul and forces Zanpakuto living there to obey Yousei's will. If this technique is successful, Yozora's blade at Yousei's hands becomes targeted Zanpakuto and can be released. Next table shows success rate of this, which is based on mental ability of both Yousei and his opponent.
My Rank > 3rd Seat Lieutenant Captain
Captain - - Last 2 posts of effect
Lieutenant Last post of effect2 posts3 posts
3rd Seat 2 posts 3 posts4 posts
Lower than 3rd3 posts 4 posts5 posts
Empty spot means both Zanpakuto are sealed and cannot be released for 5 posts (if they were released before, they go to their normal state). Numbers in table shows for how long and during which posts can Yousei release targeted Zanapkuto. Effect is same with Arrancar, but releasing zanpakuto would mean to go into opponent's resurrecion form. Effect is temporary and after 5 posts, Yozora and targeted Zanpakuto comes back to normal. Has 10 posts cool down, drains 2 stamina points each post the target Zanpakuto is released, otherwise drains only 2 points when using the technique.

3. Star of Dimension - Yozora's blade begins to shine blue.
Bankai technique - Komen Kagami (Lake Surface Mirror). Komen Kagami is a dimensional barrier technique, it creates a barrier wall that absorbs any incoming attack and then creates another barrier that fires the absorbed attack back. Absorbing an attack uses 2/3 attack's energy and shoot back uses 1/2 of absorbed attack's energy, so using both parts of this technique would use more energy than attack itself used. Has 5 posts cool down.

During Bankai, Yousei can still use his Shikai techniques.

Bankai Looks: Doesn't change the sword apart from shattering the moonstone.


Alterations: Yousei's Shihakusho (shinigami robe) becomes bright silver and a bit shinning.
Also, all Shikai techniques used in Bankai consumes 1-2 stamina points less.

Stats change:
Speed: + 10
Stamina: + 10

History and RP Sample

History: Yousei was born into one of Seireitei's most noble families. It was quite fun, but formal and boring life at the same time. Later, when he was big enough to learn, Yousei started to train and follow the way of his mother, who was captain of 13 Divisions at that time. Nothing special happened apart from his hard training until he was 11. His mother died because of some sort of inner affairs in Seireitei. When she died, Yousei fell into deep depression and looked like he lost all of his potential because of it. Next year he started Shinigami academy, but didn't show great promise there: he lacked self-confidence and will to do things.

Yousei studied in the shinigami academy for about 20 years, showed quite an ability to Kidou as well as his intelligence allowed him to understand the very hardest and most complex theory, but he was still deeply depressed. Much of his time he spent thinking if it was worth becoming Shinigami and to fight for Soul Society, he was thinking it because his mother did so, she had the pride of being one of few strongest Shinigami, but she ended up killed... By those same Shinigami. Yousei's depression ended, when he finally managed to learn his Zanpakuto's name and call it out. Yousei's Zanpakuto was named Yozora, she opened his eyes and convinced him to move forward. With her help and his talents and intelligence, he easily graduated the academy and joined 13th Squad.

Yozora's abilities were very extraordinary and because of that Yousei had no problem of becoming seated officer. In fact he took the 10th seat of 13th Division in a week after joining, but he didn't rush and further, he never rushed anywhere. Just slow and steady, he trained, increased his power and abilities over few hundreds of years, and slowly got promoted. When he got up to 3rd seat, he had the reputation of best kido specialist in whole Division, apart from Captain. His Squadmates started to ask for kido lesson and after some time, Yousei ended up as Kido teacher for Division, because his Lieutenant didn't use kido much and his Captain was always too busy. Seeing as all those other under him struggle to get stronger, Yousei didn't sit and wait either. He spent few years for training with Yozora and finally achieved Bankai.

One day Yousei was promoted to Vice-Captain because of his action in scouting mission. A small group from their Division was sent to scout an area in Seireitei, where some hollows were spotted. Captain of Yousei's Division couldn't lead the operation because he was busy at that time and entrusted his Lieutenant and 3rd Seat to do the job. The scouting failed, as they ran into area full of Gilians. Half of shinigami were taken out next moment and Yousei had to use his Shikai to defend himself. After taking out few Gillians with his kido, he found a good spot and unleashed Falling Star. Most of hollows were destroyed in one shot, others were hunted down later. When those who survived got back to their Squad, Yousei was asked for a discussion with his Captain and got promoted to Lieutenant, also he was transferred to 7th Squad together with group of his Squadmates.

There was some major re-structuring of whole 13th Divisions. Few of them were disbanded, some were integrated into other Squads, just as Yousei was sent to 7th. At the beginning there were only 7th Divisions at all. Yousei spent few weeks in his new spot. But it wasn't enough time for him even to learn the names of all his new squadmates. Then a new 8th Division was founded and Yousei got transferred again, this time to 8th.

RP Sample:
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This is my PR sample from one of Naruto based RP forum. I'm too lazy to write another.

He slowly opened his eyes. First thing that he saw was his legs... ? Second thing was a tree. He was sitting under it. He didn't know where this is, it looked like he was in a dense mist. He waited there until his senses fully came back, then stood up from moist grass, while leaning on the tree. Strange... He looked up and noticed that he can't see sky through this mist, he can't even see five steps ahead! Hey, do you know where I am? ... No answer... Ondan, do you hear me? ...Silence... Yousei gave a deep sigh and started to slowly move from the tree. He feared to lose only landmark here, but he had to do something anyway. Yousei felt soft grass under his feet as he walked past another tree. There was no need to stop, so he continued walking. After some time he came to next tree... or maybe the same. Maybe someone's fooling me, maybe I'm already under a genjutsu, though I don't feel like it... Anyway, he focused his chakra at the end of his finger and engraved "Lost" on the tree. He took a moment to admire his work, then affixed his signature. "Nice" He left his art behind and continued walking. Soon his found another tree. Another, sure, there wasn't any markings on it. Either I'm really moving, or I'm under kind of complex genjutsu. Still, only good option now was to keep going, so he didn't wait there long. Soon Yousei noticed that ground slightly goes down and that air becomes more humid. As he kept walking, he remembered song heard at feast last week. He spent a good time there. It's always better to live happy; some say this is destiny that matters, but Yousei always tell them that one is the only that can make his life happy, that this depends on your point of view, if you focus on problems, you'll never get rid of them, you'll only notice more and more of them, it's impossible to solve them all, one must look at good points, to admire good points, it's better to see painting with some good parts, than with some mistakes.

A silent tune pierced fog. It was a joyful whistle coming from man's lips as he walked down hill. "Cheri Cheri Lady, To know you is to love you, if you're..." Suddenly he felt his right leg strange, looked down and saw that he stepped into water. At least I didn't run into it... I'd be all wet now... As he got his leg out of water, he saw a lotus floating there. This kinda reminds me... A bigger, almost human size lotus came from a mist and floated to Yousei (on water). As Yousei looked at new lotus, it came closer to him. "Will you carry me through?" Lotus petals slightly moved and Yousei jumped on it. They started to move from the coast. After some time, they swam out of mist and Yousei got a better look on the area. They were in a lake, many other lotus blossoms were floating around, lake was surrounded by that mist, in middle of the lake was an island with something bright, maybe lighthouse, or huge campfire. Lake was in a valley surrounded by mountains, but most exciting part of view was sky.
It was night, huge nebula could be seen all over the sky. It was pierced by a line of light almost to half. This view was breath taking, though it wasn't first time Yousei was seeing this. As they moved for next ten minutes, Yousei was trying to get a good shot of this view in his mind, so later he could paint it. He jumped off and thanked Lotus, when they approached the island. He stood there and watched his alive transport to come back to others of his kind, then turned around and looked at the light on a only hill in this island. "Almost there..." Started walking. When he at last got to the top he saw what was that bright. "Yo, why did you call me here?" "Hi there and welcome, how do you do?" "You answer first." Yousei stood in front of large flaming bird. Phoenix had black eyes and orange-golden feathers. "I wished to talk to you" Sigh "Did you have to summon me here for that reason?" Those black eyes... "In this whole time you learnt not to hear what I say, so I thought of bringing you here for a
conversation. Last time you said you like this sky."
"I really do. Anyway, what did you want to tell me? Or you just say, that I shouldn't forget you're here?" "Yes, you shouldn't. Remember that, if you listened to me then, they could've survived..." "Do you feel the same?" "Almost" "Alright, then I'll listen to you."

When Yousei left his mind world, he woke up in his bed. It was morning of a nice day. He stood up and walked to his desk. There were many instructions, sketches, letters, sealing scrolls and other things that needed to be put in right place. There was also an old photo of his wife Natsuki and daughter Youko. He took the photo and looked at them for a moment. Natsuki had dark blue hair and black eyes, she had a kind smile while holding Youko's shoulder. Youko had orange hair and his eyes. Photo was done a week after Youko turned 15, they have gone to Country of Tea to spend there good time. It was really fun, but when they came back, it appeared that his family has caught an unknown sickness from where they were. Maybe Yousei got the sickness too, but somehow he dealt with it... and they died, in a year. Yousei put photo back and got down into his laboratory. He checked his chakra gathering process and then found his minicomp. A new mail! It says, that his friend found what Yousei was searching for and that he's awaiting his payment. Letter also included search results. I see, so they're making it there... hmmm, I guess, I'll have to contact them tomorrow. Yousei quickly replied by thanking for a good job and sending account details. He turned around, when minicomp made a beep. "You have a letter, please empty your mailbox." Letter? That's kinda old-fashioned... or really important. Anyway, gotta check it, or comp won't leave me alone. After he dressed up his usual clothes and cloak, he walked out. The letter, that he found in his box was sealed with bloodseal, which means it's totally private. Yousei bite his finger and dropped some blood on the seal. A small POOF and it disappeared. "Let's see..." Tee letter was addressed to him from someone called Michael Mugendai. Hmmm, don't know anyone by that name... It was an invitation ... to Kumogakure for a discussion. Alright, if Im needed that badly.
Yousei remembered address, then burned the letter. While looking as wind carries away it's ashes he said "Ok, don't get so lazy and old, you've your life ahead! Now, it's time for morning practice! Shiro Kaze no jutsu!" After he used half of his chakra for White Wind technique and made ten thousand laps around his house with Wind Dance technique, he got back home and started preparing for his journey.


Last edited by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:43 pm; edited 24 times in total (Reason for editing : Update)
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Aoiharu on Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:47 am

O-K!

A few things, You-chii.

  • Personality - Lets do abit more with it. Probably around 5-6 more sentances.
  • Your history looks good and your RP is awsome. ( just wanted to say d;)
  • eh. thats about it. i like these listy thingys xD


Anyways, i'll take another look once your done.

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:02 pm

Added some more personality.
Added empathy, if you don't mind.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Kaji-Kanto on Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:23 pm

Ahem, didn't want to bud in but i'd just like to point out something. The 6th division's vice captain has been taken. Just wanted to point that out since it is in approved characters.

Click if you didn't catch link in the other part of the post
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:30 pm

I know that. That's why I write it as prefered position, but I don't mind if you place me into open spot. Like... if I'm correct 5th, 13th maybe more...
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by DewBunny on Sun Oct 11, 2009 3:39 pm

Yousei i'm gonna leave this unapproved for now until Kou gets back because Calliecat hasn't posted in weeks

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:45 pm

Alright, how much may I have to wait? Also, nobody answered my question about flash step ^
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Post by DewBunny on Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:10 pm

hmm flash step is a normal ability so it's assumed

As for sixth vice it's taken still since callicat is on everyday almost v v' most divisions now need thirdseats

thirteenth needs a third seat badly

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:35 pm

13th div 3rd seat? Is there no open vice-captain spot? What about 5th?
btw is Kure 13th div VC, because his profile says he's from 1st, but I know 1st VC is Kenji.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:59 am

Alright. 13th divison's 3rd seat. (I thought I'd make better.) Still, I need to adjust it ^ right?
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Post by DewBunny on Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:36 am

just the stats really

third seat drops to 70

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:53 am

Done
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by DewBunny on Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:09 pm

Terasu Okuchou Hatsu is literally "shine on the peoples hearts"

and unless you want to add that this is approved

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:49 pm

Thanks, but that'd make it quite long. I'll just put hikaru and that gonna do it.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by DewBunny on Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:56 pm

approved

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:15 am

Updated. Yet, not fully. I'm going to add those kido that I requested before, in here. But I don't have time right now, so it'll be later.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:21 am

Just put your entire kido list in the kido section, it jsut makes the application and reapproval process easier

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:50 pm

Done.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Renjiro Haptism on Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:20 pm

Yousei im not happy about your spirit grip shikai ability as its a shikai ability it needs to be hugely tonned down (give it a one post limit or something) apart from that i think its ok. just edit it and youll be set
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Taichou on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:30 pm

Just to add, how can you target an area with the third technique of your shikai ability. How far can it go?

First of all, your history gotta be a little changed.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:30 am

Edited techniques. And about my history, Tai, do you mean those "13 Divisions"?
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Taichou on Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:50 am

In fact, yes I did. APPROVED.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:24 am

Updated.
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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:25 am

Your shikai cannot give points to Dexterity if it already is at 30. 30 is the maximum allowable level for Dexterity, due to its description.

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Re: Yousei Murakami (Lieutenant of 8th)

Post by Yousei on Sun Jan 17, 2010 3:29 am

My bad, forgot that. Edited...
But I believe my bankai also increases, as it says accuracy, which is now dexterity. Do I have to edit that too?

And I see Fujimaru is going to become Captain of 7th. In that case, I asked Kaji to be switched with other Lieutenant spot. May I edit to Lieutenant of 8th?
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