Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

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Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by BeyondBirthday on Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:14 am

Basic Information

Name: Rue Ryuzaki

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Appearance: A white long sleeve shirt that has a hole or 2, and blue faded jeans with white sneakers. His shirt sometimes had either blood, or jelly stains on it, due to the fact that he loved to kill, and he loves jelly.

Personality: Rue acts all snobbish when he meets a Soul Reaper, and when his in battle, his serious and only goes for the kill. Rue acts quietly around other people, no matter what, except Soul Reapers. When Rue meets someone with a strong spiritual power, he either lets his Pride get in the way, or his hatred get ahold of him.

Rank: Quincy Leader

Armor/Glove Information

Name: Black Holder (glove)

Bow Manifestation: A long bow that has markings of a old language on the bottom and top. It's pure black and holds devilish presences. The cord looks like it's made of silk, but it's actually spiritual pressure created by Rue.

Description: Has a mid power bow, with mid power fire. A all around bow that has devilish aim. The power of the bow ranges, from very powerful, to very weak, but very accurate. Sometimes depending on Rue's mood, but never is it weak and not accurate.

Looks: White shirt becomes pitch black, faded jeans become darker jeans, blue eyes become red with hate. His spiritual pressure becomes black and almost seems invincible, but he can be hurt, but not very well.

Techniques

Name: Blazing Phoenix
Description: Charges alot of spiritual pressure and fires a single shot that turns into a Phoenix that is on glory blaze.

Stats

Strength: 30

Speed: 15

Accuracy: 35

Stamina: 20

History and RP Sample

History: When Rue was just a kid he didn’t like anyone but his family. He never trusted anyone who didn’t share his blood. After weeks of reading and being home schooled by his foster grandparents, he learned to hate everything. After learning that he has a keen sense of aim. He decided to pick up the bow and arrow. And he did it with great honour, but he always wondered who his father and mother trully where. So he went to find out.
At the age of 9 he found out he was special, not the “retarded” special, but the supernatural special. Everytime he shot the arrow he destroyed the target and left nothing there. He just thought it was cheap equipment, but then he started to feel strange..he then started to find weird monsters..He was scared of what he saw. But he fought them off. He still tried to find out about his parents. He went to every library and counldn’t find anything that helped him in a bit. So he asked hie foster grandparents. They told him the thruth of his heritage.
He started to train more and more till he could master any attack. He practised on anything, cars, animals, even humans. He didn’t know much about his family until he was 15, when he heard about the extermination of his kin. He was outraged, he wanted the heads of the people who did this. Then he heard it was the Soul Reapers. So he dicided to kill them all. With his bow and his keen sence of spiritual abilities. He trained more and more until there was no wheres to go. So he travelled the world over.
A few years after the extermination he found himself in South Korea, hunting 2414 Hollows. He didn’t care what happened to anyone near by, he just wanted to kill them all. He thought that if he brought enought Hollows to the world, the Soul Reapers would come there to murder more. So he just did his thing, killing everything in sight, but not one Soul Reaper in sight. So now he made his way to Japan, to find more.
When Rue thought he was the last of the Quincy, he found out there was more then just him, so he went on a hunt to find them all. After a few years of searching he was getting worried that what he thought was a truth, quickly became a dream that he thought up. But he kept fighting that dream, hoping to make it a reality for himself, and for his family. He kept training while searching, trying not to get rusty, he fought Hollows left & right, and he still kept his cool. Not letting anyone get in his way to find peace. After a long 7 months he grew tired and he just stopped looking all together, but he still looked now and then, hoping, hoping he would find one other Quincy in the world. He was determined to find one. Or die trying.


RP Sample: Walking down in South Korea Rue sees 185 Hollows feasting on Newly dead souls. “Time to die!” He fires 1 single shot at the Hollows and 90 of them are destroyed in a large blast. “Heh...” As Rue saw the hollows see him he fired another 2 shots at them and both missed. “What?” Rue then saw that they are quite fast hollows. So he fired 13 blasts nailing 32. “grr...Where are those stupid Soul Reapers?!” So Rue let the Hollows get closer and close. Till Rue shot 1 single blast to wipe out the rest of them. “No one gets close...ever...” After the battle is over Rue starts to walk down the streets. Not caring about anything. He saw a injured animal that had no chance of living and he reached for it. “It’s okay..I won’t hurt you..” And he touched it, healing its wounds and the animal scurried off. When the other people saw him tend to the animal and thought he was a nice person. He screamed at them and ran off. Then he shot their house on fire. the he starts to walk down the streest of another town, looking behind him every other minute to make sure he wasn’t followed. And by the time he reached the air port he noticed some odd characters about 20 or so feet away from him. So he dicided to go on a plane and fly to Japan, to see if that’s where they all are. And he saw the same people get on the same plane as him and he found that to be a bit odd and let it be. And as he walks down the street he sees a stronger Hollow down the way and he runs after it. He sees it chasing a spirit women and Rue fires a shot at it’s head and it barely scratches it. “What?...” Then the Hollow turns around and lauches a punch a Rue and he was too slow to dodge it. As Rue hit the wall he put his glove on. And he fired a large shot at it again, and it did nothing. “What!?” Rue kept trying to defeat it but couldn’t. Just then, the people who have been following Rue started to fight with the Hollow. “His mine! Get away!” Then the Hollow got away. And so did the others. “I’ll get you all....”


Last edited by Techi on Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:33 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Approved and Ready for Rp.)
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Shigeki Amate on Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:22 am

With your Rp sample u could only get level 2... Make it longer about 200-300 words...

History has to be longer much longer. History should be about 500 words

Appearance Personality your armor and glove information should be longer to about 3 lines for each 2 at the minimum
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by BeyondBirthday on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:02 am

Shigeki Amate wrote:With your Rp sample u could only get level 2... Make it longer about 200-300 words...

History has to be longer much longer. History should be about 500 words

Appearance Personality your armor and glove information should be longer to about 3 lines for each 2 at the minimum

RP sample = 400+
History = 300+
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Lifeless on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:13 am

~Approved~
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Post by Shigeki Amate on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:20 am

Un-Approved... And Nick you really gotta lock the topic

You didn't do what I told you to do. I said make your Appearance Personality and Glove Information Longer.
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Lifeless on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:21 am

He made personality longer like 3 lines you told him and I didnt see the glove part
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Shigeki Amate on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:23 am

What are you talking about? His personality Appearance are still one line..
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Lifeless on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:23 am

oh now i see
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:09 am

I agree with Shi. alllllloooootttttttttttt more description on the personality and looks

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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sat Aug 08, 2009 12:02 pm

Bump. Finish the application

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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Mizaki on Sun Aug 16, 2009 2:14 am


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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:24 am

you cannot have .5 stats.

You have 86 stat points like that. You are missing 4. Fix it.

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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Sith on Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:31 am

I fixed it and moved it, It just seem so much easier than to put a point on each than to keep moving the topic back and forth on minnor points suck as 4 points, wwhen the guy is making every thing even.
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Re: Rue Ryuzaki [Quincy Leader]

Post by Sith on Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:34 am

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