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Post by shinji hirameki on Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:41 pm

Basic Information

Name: Shinji hirameki
Nickname: Purple flash

Age: Shinji has the physical age of a 17 year old man, while he is in fact 238 years old.

Gender: Male

Seat: Vaizard recruit

Looks:
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Shinji looks like a 17 year old man with brown hair and deep blue eyes. he has a scar on his nose, chest and right arm.
He wears a regular shinigami outfit, though he ripped one sleeve of and weards bandage's around both of his hands.
He always has a serious look on his face.

after having lived in the human world for a while, he chose to wear clothes that dont stand out too much. He now wears a black shirt without sleeves. He also cut his hair and doesnt see any point in being serious anymore, wich can be seen on his face.

Personality: Since his defection from the sereitei, his personality changed alot. It might just have been him living close to humans, but he acted more and more human everyday he spent there.
He walks among the villagers when he isnt being lazy. Since he got his hands on a gigai, he even joined school and tried to make friends there. Though he is still interested in the simplest things, he cant get enough of the human's and their technology. he worked out alot in the gym's and is adicted to steven sigall and jet li movies.

Shinji can be very serious. There are few things sacred to him in this world, but he will do alot to defend the people of earth and his honour. He has a rather disturbing sense of humor, saying things like he'll kill/drown/hang you, then follow with "neh, im just messing with ya".
He also party's with humans at festival's and school party's.
Shinji is a man with a strong sense of duty and justice, believing strongly that those with great power should use to more noble causes than just self-satisfaction.
Though most vaizard and shinigami dont like eachother, he doesnt have any hatred towards any of them. Though he is afraid of what the shinigami think of him because he unconsciously killed multiple shinigami.

The person he likes best is hikari, that is why he spends alot of time in the inner world. Hikari is the only one who stood by him when he had a hard time becoming a shinigami. Though he can be quite demanding at times, he will always help others out, though it might take some time to do so. When helping someone, shinji wants to do things by himself, because his shikai is meant for one on one combat. He is also extremely calm, even in battle, and is very seldom surprised by even the most drastic of actions.
He is also fully aware of the limits of his abilities.


Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength:
Normal: 35
Shikai: 35
Mask: 35

Speed:
Normal: 40
Shikai: 40
Mask: 40

Dexterity:
Normal: 35
Shikai: 40
Mask: 40

Stamina:
normal: 20
shikai: 25
mask: 35



Mask Information
Stamina: +10

Name: Munashii

Manifestation:
It can take the form of a completely black hikari, who has a samurai like appearance and uses a katana + chain as weapons.
Though he usually appears as a black and white version of shinji, he then uses all of shinji's shikai techniques.
He has a very controlled nature and always speaks the truth, infact he is alot like shinji in most ways.

He has more then half as much reiatsu then shinji has, and his swordsmanship exceeds shinji aswell.
Though he is a great swordsman, he doesnt have the skills to control shikai as well as shinji does, giving shinji the upper hand in ability power.
Munashii also has some frightening power's that shinji himself does not have, but obtains them when wearing his mask.

Unique Ability:
Munashii Shikon: this is a technique that uses hikari's ability to use light-based attacks and munashii's vast amount of reiatsu.
He forces out all of his remaining reiatsu untill it becomes visible around his body.
Shinji then focuses solely on his sword as it becomes enveloped in a dark purple reiatsu layer.
Shinji can use this reiatsu to empower his strikes or by releasing it in a slicing motion to send a powerfull wave of reiatsu at his enemy.
The attack is powerfull enough to completely counter hadou spell up to level 70.


Hollow Mask Appearance:
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Shinji's mask is white with a red pattern near the mouth area.
It doesnt seem to have a mouth, but if you look closely enough, small teeth are visible.
It augments shinji's purple/blue reiatsu into a deeper, darker purple.


Duration: 5 posts active, 5 posts cooldown

stamina drain:
Munashii shikon:
1 per enhanced strike used.
3 for the reiatsu burst attack, also disolves the mask after use of the attack.

Zanpakuto Information
Dexterity +5
Stamina +5

Zanpakuto Name: Hikari "Radiance"

Zanpakuto Looks:
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Shinji's zanpaktou looks just like a regular zanpaktou with a dark blue/purple hilt.

Zanpakuto Description: The zanpaktou itself doesnt have any special characteristics other then the shiny blade wich leans to the swords name. The shining blade has color's that shift between bright blue and dark purple.
Hikari is a kidou based zanpaktou using Light.

Released Zanpakuto Description:
Hikaru: This technique is used to distact/blind an opponent by making the blades glow and then shine out a blinding light.
This will temporarily blind the enemy if shot into the eyes. Lasts for 1 post.
Kai: At first, shinzui will alter the light around his enemy, shinzui then unleashes a cutting wave of purple colored reiatsu from his blade. He does so by charging it with reiatsu to the point of it glowing in a bright blue/purple color, then he will make alot of stabbing motions one after the other with the blade and multiple shreds of reiatsu are launched at the desired position. This is actually a projectile attack, shooting small cutting reiatsu waves that carve up whatever it hits. Can only be blocked by a kidou based attack/defense. This fires an amount of 25 shreds of reiatsu, these are doubled at bankai.
Zanzou: Using hikari's most powerfull shikai ability of altering light, he alter's the light in a radius of 25 meter's. He can then move around exactly 2 seconds faster then the one who he casted the ability on would see. Meaning that the one whom he casted the ability on will see him move, but in reality they will see the afterimage, and when they would attack and hit him, they would actually be 2 seconds too late, thus missing him. The technique affects the senses through sight. Once cast, the ability will last for 2 posts.

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The afterimages are only seen by those who are under the effect of zanzou. Those out of the attack's range will just see shinji move normally and those hit by the technique to have very bad timing, or easily said they attack shinji's position 2 seconds too late. Only those hit by zanzou are seeing afterimages.

Stamina drain (Shikai attacks):
Hikaru: Drains 1 stamina per use.
Kai: Drains 2 stamina per use.
Zanzou: Drains 8 stamina per use, 5 posts cooldown.


Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "Burst, Hikari"

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
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When hikari enter his shikai, the blade extends for 20 centimeter's in length, the tip of the blade curls a little to give it a larger cutting edge. The sword now has a new thrait, the sword glow's with the color of shinji's reiatsu.

Zanpakuto Spirit:
Looks:
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Hikari's true form is that of a young samurai. he looks fierce, though he is actually a nice person and a wise teacher.
He thought shinji alot about his inner power and kidou techniques. He teaches shinji alot about deceiving and how to use his technique's best.

Personality: Hikari is a very wise zanpaktou, he learned shinji that not everything can be dealt with by negotiating.
He also thought him how to surpress his strength and how to use it to strike fear into the hearts of his enemy's.
The thing hikari excelled at was deception and cruelness on the battlefield. towards shinji he is very submissive.
He seems always serene and apathetic towards other people. He is also extremely calm, and is noticably quiet, rarely speaking unless to make his intentions known or make a point. He is noted at being extremely patient and not given to rash actions and disdains it as a flaw in others. He can see the skill or potential in others and what they must do to attain that fullness of that potential. Hikari very rarely shows any sign of distress or surprise.
Despite being a controlled person, he is cold, ruthless, and calculating when fighting. Once he is done fighting, however, he reverts back to normal.



Zanpakuto Realm:
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Hikari's realm is a pond filled with koi's. shinji spends alot of time in this realm, training with hikari and learning how to make better use of his ability's. The place is covered with beautifull trees and bushes, it also has high cliff's and green plane's wich are perfect for meditating and training.

History and RP Sample

History:

early life:
When shinji was still alive, he was forced to live on the streets. His family was poor and left him at a forest when he was 7 years old.
Since then, shinji has always taken care of himself by stealing food and clothes. He lived in a stolen tent in thesame woods as where his parents had left him.
Though he knew that noone would come back to pick him up, he still wanted to remain there untill someone came to end his miserable life.
He stole from every bakery, butcher, restaurant, snackhouses and clothing store in the vacinity. Though he didnt like doing so, he knew he had to if he wanted to life.

At the age of ten, shinji lost his tent to a forest fire. Having no place to go, shinji went to an orphinage where he rose to power among the children.
Carrying a stick with him, he beat those who picked on the weaker and protected himself against those who would harm him. After a while, a young couple came to pick him up and take him in into their house.
in the beginning, shinji didnt like them at all, locking himself in his room all day. But after a few weeks, shinji started to like his foster parents.
Though this didnt last long because of a robbery at their house wich cost them their life.

A new beginning:
After getting shot, shinji walked around the city for month's. after a while, shinji couldnt remember his real parents.
And as the months flew by, he couldnt even remember his old life as a 10 year old.
Even though he didnt know anything of his former life, he wasnt bothered by it. He loved the fact that he was no longer bound by things like food, shelter or parents. He loved being care free and went everywhere he wanted without being kicked out by the owner or the police.

Though he didnt get to enjoy it for long, because he was soon to be burried by a shinigami and taken to the rukongai.

Life in rukongai wasnt that hard compared to his former life. He was surrounded by carring people, but also by drunks and brigands.
Many people alwats bragged about their sons being a soul reaper, though shinji didnt think that was such a big deal. It wasnt untill he saw a luitenant shinigami slay a hollow that he started respecting the shinigami. Because he was a little bit of a bigshot when he was younger, he didnt hessitate to ask the shinigami to introduce him to the shinigami academy.

becoming a soul reaper & 4th squad:

When shinji entered the shinigami school, he was tested on his skills as a shinigami. He had extraodinary speed and had alot of reiatsu, but other then that he was no more then the ordinary shinigami.
It wasnt long after that that the monitor's chose to place him at the 4th squad and let him make use of his movement speed and reiatsu on a battlefield so he can heal other's.
At first shinji was happy to be placed in a division so soon, but that was before he found out that the schooling for a 4th squad member took way longer then most other squads.
He didnt like the fact that he wasnt able to be placed among the real fighter's, though this was actually one of the many reasons for him to train harder.
One of the good things was that he was being trained in defensive and offensive kidou technique's. The first days, all he did literally blew up in his face. But after a few days of practice, he started getting the hang of it.

Kendo training and becoming a 7th division member:

Shinji excelled at using kidou and has had an incredible lot of training behind him. Because of his high amounts of reiatsu and his skilled use at kidou, he was placed at the 4th squad's training facility.
They planned on teaching him how to use his skills in order to heal and help other's. Though shinji was willing to help other's, he was aware of the 4th squads reputation and their low ranking among the division's.
He wanted to help other's, but his pride kept him from becoming one of the lower ranking shinigami. But trough it all, he went to the facility to learn about healing kidou. After a few days, shinji was placed back from the 4th squad because of his overwhelming reiatsu.
He didnt have the required mentality to heal other's and was thus placed in the 7th squad. When he entered the 7th squad barrack's, it was far different then the 4th squad. There where lots of strong, skilled men here that where known for their skills in keeping order among the people in soul society.
The 7th squad had alot to offer to shinji, kidou classes, kendo classes and tactics.

After having finished his kidou training in the barracks, he went to kendo classes with a very strict teacher. If there was one thing shinji hated, it was the fact that some people looked down on him.
He had alot of anger in his heart, but he also had alot of compassion, pride and the will to help others. When he first entered the dojo, he bowed before his trainer and thanked him for teaching him the ropes.
The man looked him over and put him in a special class. At first shinji thought he was being placed in a group for exceptional swordsman, while he was actually placed in a class for beginner's. Thinking that it was because of his former 4th squad training, he was infuriated and wanted to be placed in a higher grade of training.
But the trainer wouldnt oblige and told him to step down or he would have to teach him a lesson of dignity. Shinji didnt back down and had to fight against the weakest of the exceptional swordsman.
At first shinji had the upper hand because of his quickness and speed in his strikes, but in the end he was struck down with one well placed blow. It was then that shinji knew why he wasnt placed at a high grade, he just wasnt ready yet.
He accepted the fact that he was still unprepared and apologized to the men and went back to where he belonged, for now.

7th squad luitenant:
Shortly after having prevented a fifth brawl in the rukongai district, shinji was on his way home when he got a strange feeling in his stumach. After passing trough the gate's, a loud alarm sounded in the 7th squad barracks. There was a hollow sighting in the poorest parts of the rukongai. Several shinigami of the 7th squad allready set out towards the beast. Upon arrival, alot of men where severely injured in the fight. It wasnt long after that that he found out what the hollow's power was.
The hollow looked like a flying ball of tentacles that let out spores that where able of taking over corpses. After its rampage in rukongai, the hollow had a large army of nearly 20 corpses.

He knew he had to slay the zombies, but he couldnt strike down his comrades, even if they where just empty husks of their former self. It was only when he saw that theyre faces where mangled and tentacles where pouring out that he knew what he had to do.
It was a matter of seconds untill the corpses would spawn young hollow creature's from their flesh, so shinji had to move fast and decapicate the corpses. After releasing his shikai "hikari", he quickly soared trough the men like a knife trough butter.
Moments later, the other shinigami slew the hollow with their combined power and his hikari. Sending out a burst of reiatsu from his sword, he cut the hollow into pieces and started taking care of the body's, with help from the 7th division.
The next morning, shinji was promoted to vice captain of the 7th squad.

The road to Absolution

Shinji had alot of doubt, hatred and anger in his head because of the stress he got with his newly obtained vice captain ranking. He was afraid to lose men in battle because of his inability to save them.
This led to him thinking he got insane when he started to hear voices. But on one evening at the night guard, he felt his body move on his own while the voice in his head became stronger. He attacked a gaurd on duty and wasnt able to regain control untill the man was dead. This led to him leaving the soul society for a crime he commited but was unable to stop.

He then travelled to the real world where the voice became even stronger, resulting to a hollow mask being formed on his head and him killing multiple shinigami on duty protecting the real world. He eventually found a way to use his reiatsu to supress his inner hollow from time to time. Not long after that, he found a group of people that could grant him a chance of beating his inner demon's and wielding it's strenght.
Though he grabbed to oppurtunity with both hands, he did not care that he might get killed trying, stating that he would rather be dead then to kill another living person against his will.

He then battled the beast inside of him and nearly lost if it was not for hikari, who told him he had to calm down and focus on winning, instead of fighting in fear of losing his body.
He then won using his shikai and got back his body, with extra's.

RP Sample:
It was a dark night in soul society, most honest people had gone to bed by this time, but not shinji. He wasnt allowed to go to bed for he was on a guard duty.
He was sitting on the edge of the watchtower and was looking out over the lands, covered in the shadow's of the night. It was a beautifull things to see, complete darkness with some small lights shining trough windows in the distirct village's.
Shinji then stood up and jumped back into the tower and turned to face his companion on today's guard duty. "Wake me up when we have to change shift's, i have better things to do then sitting and watching".
The man nodded at shinji as he sat down in the corner of the tower and unsheated his sword. He closed his eyes and a minute later, the darkness was shifting into a clear and welcoming sunlight.
As he opened his eyes, he was no longer in the watchtower but in a large pond filled with koi. As he leaned back into the grass, a heavily armored man walked up to the resting shinji.
"You have returned master, what is the matter. Did something happen on guard duty" the man asked shinji.
"Its actually the other way around hikari, nothing happened, and didnt i tell you to call me Shinji ?" shinji said bored while rolling on his side.
Shinji had alot going on lately, he had to prove himself to his captain that he was worthy of filling the void the current vice captain left after he died.
Though he didnt know the previous vice captain at all, he must have had quite the reputation to leave the job open for this many a year.
But trough it all, he was dead set on becoming a vice captain so he could take some of the weight of the captain's shoulder's.
It was not long after that that he was rudely awakened by his companion.
"Shinji-san, we have a problem" the man said while pointing at a large fire with plumes of smoke towering high above the village.
It was unknown to him how things could have gotten this far, but without thinking twice, he jumped down the tower and ran to the village.
Before he arrived, a platoon allready had been deployed to take care of the creature.
"What happened here" shinji asked a man that lay injured on the ground. Though the only thing the man said was that shinji should breathe carefully.
When he looked around, alot of villagers and shinigami alike came walking out of the village.
"What the..." shinji mumbled when the people surrounded him. "Why are they doing this, just in case i'd better be prepared" shinji thought as he took out his sword and pointed it to the sky.
"Burst, Hikari"


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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:53 pm

Squad 4 already has a Vice Captain, as stated in the squad availibility topic, and a third seat even though it isnt updated.

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Post by shinji hirameki on Thu Jan 28, 2010 8:21 pm

is the 7th squad luitenant still open, it says so in the topic ?
im nearly done with my application, so i hope its open Razz
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Fri Jan 29, 2010 3:20 pm

No, it is not.

Edit: Yes it is. That was my bad.

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Post by shinji hirameki on Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:05 pm

no problem Happy
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Post by shinji hirameki on Fri Jan 29, 2010 4:45 pm

okey, im ready to be checked by someone, take your time and i dont mind if your a critic =D
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Post by Kenji Akira on Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:36 pm

Personality & Released Zanpaktou needs WAY more description.
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Fri Jan 29, 2010 7:06 pm

And the kido is not part of the application. I made sure of that

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Post by shinji hirameki on Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:17 pm

i kicked out the kidou and added to the personality's
i also gave a different spin to the zanpaktou ability's.
i added that the zanpaktou is a light/speed based weapon, not lightspeed Happy
can be misread so i thought i'd mention it Razz
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Post by Kenji Akira on Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:18 am

he does so by charging it with chakra to the point of it glowing in a bright blue/purple color

This isn't Naruto, please remove.

Also, you can't have 2 Zanpaktou families, you need to choose one or the other. Plus, there's no such thing as speed based Zanpaktou.
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Post by shinji hirameki on Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:47 am

sorry, it was a typo Happy meant to say reiatsu
im on naruto ingoo aswell, so i messed up a bit Razz

edited to light.


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Post by shinji hirameki on Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:24 am

edited, anything else ?

i also noticed another 7th squad vice appliacation, how can we solve that ??
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Post by shinji hirameki on Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:01 pm

Bumpo Happy

should i add stuff like shunpo and the air walking ability and such ?
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Post by shinji hirameki on Tue Feb 02, 2010 7:57 am

Bump

someone please check this, i want to finish this and Rp as soon as possible.
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Post by shinji hirameki on Wed Feb 03, 2010 5:42 pm

Bumpo
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Post by Kenji Akira on Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:13 pm

Bump once every 24 hours, please and thank you

Add stamina drains for each technique.
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Post by shinji hirameki on Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:43 am

oke thank you Happy
and sorry for that, i was impatient and wanted to rp Very Happy
my apologies killme
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Post by shinji hirameki on Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:59 am

I have added the stamina drains for bankai and shikai attacks like you asked me to do.
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Post by shinji hirameki on Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:37 pm

Also edited his appearance (hair) a bit and added where he keeps his sword. now it's finished for as far as i know, correct me if i am wrong Razz
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Post by shinji hirameki on Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:17 pm

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Post by shinji hirameki on Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:15 pm

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Post by shinji hirameki on Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:25 pm

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Post by Kenji Akira on Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:39 am

at first, shinzui will alter the light around his enemy

Needs more explanation

he fires a double amount total to 50 shreds of reiatsu. these are very hard to dodge.

Do you mean in one shot? If so, the amount need to either be lowered greatly or the stamina need to be highered

Zanzou: using hikari's most powerfull shikai ability of altering light, he alter's the light in a radius of 75 meter's. he can then move around exactly 2 seconds faster then the one who he casted the ability on would see. meaning that the one whom he casted the ability on will see him move, but in reality they will see the afterimage, and when they would attack and hit him, they would actually be 2 seconds too late, thus missing him. the technique affects the senses through sight. once cast, the ability will last for 3 posts.

I believe we disallow after image from what I've seen so far. If so, please remove or edit

Ranpu Ken: Dissolves his actual blade and replaces it with a blade made of pure light. it is now slightly sharper then before.


Yeah, I'd rather something like a Spiritual Pressure based thing, not pure light.

If the blade is broken it can completely recover to allow the battle to continue.

This is irrelevent as all Zanpaktou can heal themselves unless you mean that it quickens. If so, then place how long it takes to completely heal.




saigyouku hikari: saigyouku hikari is the most powerfull attack of hikari in bankai. when used, shinji will launch multiple white/purple orbs that swallow all light around the enemy. this will blind them and dissorient them while the orbs surrounding him form together and creating a huge sphere which engulfs everything within a significant radius. Anyone within that radius will potentially get caught in it. Immediately following that the sphere collapses in on itself using the compressed light to crush everything within it. Only a strong enough spiritual pressure can push back and destroy this power.

You need to describe the radius.

Also, what level of Spiritual Pressure can break it? Captain, Vice, 3rd Seat, etc.?
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:41 am

After Image is allowed, it just cannot be used continuously, and takes stamina to use in general.

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Post by shinji hirameki on Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:15 pm

[quote="Kenji Akira"]
at first, shinzui will alter the light around his enemy
it combines light with reiatsu in order to make it shine brighter at his command, when the technique is used.
he cant do this on a really large scale, like on a city/town.


he fires a double amount total to 50 shreds of reiatsu. these are very hard to dodge.
i do not mean in one shot, it is one shot for every stab he makes, wich are 25 in shikai, 50 in bankai.



Zanzou: using hikari's most powerfull shikai ability of altering light, he alter's the light in a radius of 75 meter's. he can then move around exactly 2 seconds faster then the one who he casted the ability on would see. meaning that the one whom he casted the ability on will see him move, but in reality they will see the afterimage, and when they would attack and hit him, they would actually be 2 seconds too late, thus missing him. the technique affects the senses through sight. once cast, the ability will last for 3 posts.

the afterimages are only seen by those who are under the effect of zanzou. those out of the attack's range will just see shinji move normally and those hit by the technique to have very bad timing, or easily said they attack shinji's position 2 seconds too late. only those hit by zanzou are seeing afterimages.

Ranpu Ken: Dissolves his actual blade and replaces it with a blade made of light/reiatsu. it is now slightly sharper then before.


i made it light and reiatsu instaid of pure light.

If the blade is broken it can completely recover to allow the battle to continue.

i mean that it can heal itself instantly, ill add it to the app.



saigyouku hikari: saigyouku hikari is the most powerfull attack of hikari in bankai. when used, shinji will launch multiple white/purple orbs that swallow all light around the enemy. this will blind them and dissorient them while the orbs surrounding him form together and creating a huge sphere which engulfs everything within a significant radius. Anyone within that radius will potentially get caught in it. Immediately following that the sphere collapses in on itself using the compressed light to crush everything within it. Only a strong enough spiritual pressure can push back and destroy this power.

it'll be a 50 meter radius from the spot he used it on, making it hard to dodge. the ones that can break it are,
- captain level reiatsu
- vice captain level entering bankai, because of the immense release of reiatsu

i thought i allready edited that, seems i forgot to do so Razz
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