Asano Kitano, Squad 7 Lieutenant (Finished)

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Asano Kitano, Squad 7 Lieutenant (Finished)

Post by pro150 on Mon Jan 25, 2010 1:22 am

aaBasic Information

Name: Asano Kitano

Age: Appears 19, actually 350

Gender: Male

Division: squad 7

Seat: Lieutenant

Looks: (umm I'm not sure if a picture is required, because i don't have one that i think really fits this character, but if you need me to find one i'll try)
Asano is a lanky figure. Weighing in at 132.3 pounds, he stands at a towering 6'3". He's not the most muscular person, however, he has a quite reasonably well-toned body. His eyes are bright blue, and his hair is jet black, and cropped towards the right. He keeps his hair quite short, as he feels it would get in his way if he let it grow past a few inches. Despite his best efforts to keep it smooth, his hair always seems to become spiked. His eyes appear to have kindness, but within them is a cold ambition that can be seen upon looking closely. His skin is a a light tan shade. On his right arm, usually hidden under his shinigami robe, is a large tattoo of a serpent.

Personality: Asano tries to act kind, and understanding of his squad members, but in reality, it is his own desire for greatness that pushes him forward. He treats his self-preservation above the lives of others, as if he were to die, his ambition of one day rising to the seat of head captain would be forever lost. He feels that this is obtainable through hard work, mixed with a medley of other things. He is incredibely cunniing, and quite devious, havving succesfully fooled his captain, a man whom once tried to killl him for starting a resistance movement in the rukongai, into trusting him. He desires to attain power ad control through whatever means necessary, despite his facade of being a caring and kind lieutenant.
Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength: 10
Shikai:
Bankai:

Speed: 25
Shikai: 30
Bankai:40

Dexterity: 25
Shikai: 30
Bankai: 30

Stamina: 30
Shikai: 30
Bankai: 40

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Nigenteki Dokuga

Zanpakuto Looks: Nigenteki Dokuga is one of the exceedingly rare dual-zanpakutou within the soul society. When unreleased, it is a set of two short-swords, one of which Asano carries at each hip. Each blade is slender, and quite light, but forged with strong steel, so that the blades never sway, no matter how much force they are swung with. The blades a dull tint, and despite what people would believe to be possible, it is believed that if they catch a glint of sunlight, despite their dull hue, the swords will glint with a uncanny green light. This is believed to be because in the method that these zanpakuto were created. At the time of their forging, the blades supposedly had poison dripped into the length of the hot metal, perhaps the very reason the zanpakuto took on the nature it has today. The edge is extremely sharp on both blades, and both swords have a slight curve to it. Neither has a crosspiece, and both possess rather plain black leather hilts.

Image of the swords:
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Zanpakuto Description: While unreleased, Nigenteki Dokuga has a mild poison permanantly coating its blade. This poison protects the blades, from any acid like substances that would try to disentegrate them. This poison is believed to be forged into the blade itself, and therefore cannot be washed away by any means. This poison, however, is also rather mild. When cut, the victim would feel mild spreading pain over the area surrounding the cut (similar to what one would feel from a sunburn) over a time of four posts, slight numbness and nausea will follow. Though this toxic is not strong, if multiple hits are gained, it can have extremely damaging effects (i.e. 8-10 wounds= vomitting, intense full body pain, etc.)

Released Zanpakuto Description: When released, the blades of Nigenteki Dokuga turn into a form of fist claws. These claws are channels for the variety of toxins of Nigenteki Dokuga. The way in which these toxins work, and the method through which they are formed, are extremely unique. The part of the gauntlets that covers the back of Asano's fists injects him slightly, with tiny needles, drawing very small amounts of blood, and draining it into the zanpakuto. After this happens, this blood is stored in small sacs within the skulls covering the blade, which is used as a base for the toxins, in order to prevent his own toxins from having any effects on himself. He then must channel his own reaitsu into the blades in order to create the toxins. Their are several different types of toxins which he can create, some more draining than others to conjure. After he creates the poison, it is then stored in the skull from which point at his choosing it will drip down and onto the blade. While these toxins cannot be washed off by outside influences, such as fire or water, it will naturally drip off the blades, over the course of three posts after being released. He can put two different toxins, one on each set of claws, but he must pay the stamina cost for each, whereas if he uses the same poison on both weapons, he must only pay the stamina cost once. The various toxins are:

Numbing Poison: This poison is relatively quick moving (1-2 posts for complete effect) but is not very harmful. However, used against the right opponent, it can be incredibly effective. What it does, is it numbs the bodies muscles, causing some slight loss of fine motor skills, and slowing reaction times, and the brain slightly. This slows reaction times by a healthy amount, but, must importantly, is the effect it has on the mouth. It numbs the tongue and mouth the degree where it becomes impossible pronounce language at all. This is enormously effective against kido reliant opponents, for it totally cuts off their ability to use kido for as long as it is afflicting them, unless they have a method of performing the kido without speech. This applies to any other abilities which requires the opponents to say something, including zanpakutou releases. (note, due to the ability of captains and those who possess bankai to release their zanpakutou without calling its name, such opponents are still able to release their shikai) Lasts 4 posts. 2 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is a bright green.

Agonizing Poison: This poison specializes in inflicting vast amounts of pain, and doing relatively high levels of tissue and organ damage to opponents, though not enough to be lethal with a single dose. Upon beng cut, the poison moves somewhat slowly throughout the opponents body. The pain starts from the point of rupture, and gradually spreads throughout the entire body. It inflicts some minor damage to muscle cells as it moves (-1.5 strength and speed as it moves) and takes four posts to completely spread. However, the pain is greatest once the toxin reaches the organs, at which point the agony will render many enemies incapable of continuing combat. Upon reaching the organs, it causes a reasonable amount of tissue damage. For several days, the opponent willbe incapable of using their digestive tract. Additionally, lung capacity is reduced, making their breathes more shallow, and causing them to tire when engaged in physical combat more quickly. It takes 4 posts to completely spread. Lasts 6 posts (including spread time) 3.5 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is orange.

Paralytic Poison: This poison specializes in going after the muscles of the opponents body and rendering them useless as quickly as possible, to prevent motion, and allow Asano to toy with opponents as he chooses. one main advantage to this poison is that it is particularly long lasting, staying in the opponents body for up to 6 posts. this poison focuses on flowing to the muscles of the calves, hamstrings, thighs, biceps, triceps, and wrists, effectively neutralizing motion of the arms and legs once it has reached theses muscles. It is exceptionally fast moving, taking a mere 2 posts to reach these muscles, one post after which, the enemy's speed and strength will have been reduced a great deal, a second post after which, they will be incapable of using these muscles at all unless through a method such hiryenyaku. 3 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is purple.

Lethal Toxin: This toxin is by far and away the most deadly in Asano's arsenal. It flows continually through the blood, until it reaches either the brain or the heart. However, due to it's slow speed, it is quite possible for death to be avoided by those with medical experience, or those seek medical aid with enough time left. Once it reaches the brain or the heart however, it disentegrates the tissue at an astonishing rate, killing the target in under a minute. It moves extremely slowly, at 1 centimeter a post, so unless the blow is particularly close to either vital spot, it will take quite sometime for it to kill. This poison is very slick, and falls off of Asano's blades in only 2 posts. 5 Stamina cost to generate. It is completely unnoticeable until it kills.

Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Course through their veins, Nigenteki Dokuga!

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
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Note, one of these on each hand. Additionally, he can also use them in a 'combat' mode, in which the blades lengthen to two and a half feet. While using this mode, however, his poisons last a post less time.

Zanpakuto Spirit:
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Zanpakuto Realm:
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Bankai Information
(This applies to captains, and advanced lieutenants only)

Bankai Description: Asano's bankai transforms him completely, turning him into a mixture between human and serpent. While in this form, He can lace toxins down his enormous claws. All his shikai toxins while in bankai spread twice as quickly, and cost 1 less stamina to produce, in addition to lasting one post longer. His bankai lasts 8 posts, with a 5 post cooldown. He gains several new abilities as well.

Poison Spit: While in bankai, Asano's strange body generates enormous amounts of toxins on its own. So much, in fact, that he can shoot large amounts of it out in liquid form during his attacks. This poison spit, moves in glob-like clusters, is guided by is reaitsu. Due to the fact that it is not going to be able to enter the blood stream easily, this poison becomes acidic once exposed to the air, burning rather rapidly through clothing, or even hierro, and then into the soft tissue underneath. After it breaches the skin, it causes the tissue underneath to sting violently, and moves quickly to slow the target down (takes 2 posts to burn through skin, minus 20% speed if it does so. Can do significant damage. 2 stamina cost)

Burrow: A useful escaping technique which Asano uses. By using his powerful claws, and using a minor amount of liquid toxin to coat his entire body in a slick layer of light acid, he can then dig extremely rapidly through the ground, digging up to 10 feet a second. This can come in extremely handy for evading enemy attacks. (2 staminca cost)

Venomous Gale: While in bankai, Asano can shoot out condensed orbs of poisonous reaitsu. These orbs are highly condensed, and therefore are black These move extremely quickly towards the target. As it moves, it releases a a toxic gas, which spreads out around it. If hit by the orb itself, the person will have the toxin move extremely rapidly through their system. Causes initial damage to the persons vitals if it contacts with them as well. total effect spread out over 8 posts after inhalation, or 3 posts after direct contact. Lasts for 8 posts. Speed/strenght are slowed down by 5 percent per post as toxin spreads. The toxin will gradually damage the afflicteds liver, an extremely important target, as, once the liver is damaged or destroyed, the opponent will be incapable of filtering further poisons that are funneled into their body. Causes minor damage to other organs as well. 3.5 stamina cost.

Viper Strike: This is pherhaps Asano's most lethal toxin. it can only be released through his teeth. He must then bite the target within 2 psots, and maintain contact in the bite for at least a second. If these conditions are met, the target will face nausea and hallucinations in one, total paralysis in two, and the death within 4 posts. This toxin is extremely hard to create, and therefore must not be used lightly. 8 stamina cost.

Poisonous spines: As can be noted in the picture, the majority of Asano's serpentine body is covered in spines and spikes. These can be shot out from several different points on his body as projectile weapons. These can be shot out from several places. One such place is his lengthy tail, the other is his mask area. These spines, while not terribly large (large as a small dagger each) can be covered with anyone of his four standard poisons. However, once a poison is selected for the spines, while it costs him no stamina, he cannot change it until he next releases bankai.

Poison Nova: This is one of Asano's few gaseous poison abilities. Using reaitsu, he turns a large amount of liquid poison in his body into gas, and then excretes these deadly fumes in every direction around himself. The fumes spread out and travel over a distance of 50 yards in every direction. The poison is payalytic over the course of 3 posts, and lethal over the course of 9, even with only a small amount in the sytem. 6 stamina cost.

Poison Tail: Asano, whille in bankai, has a long 12 foot tail extend out behind him. This tail is extremely muscular. Also, the tip of it is quite sharp, and filled with a unique toxin unlike any other Asano possesses. This toxin causes the opponent to swell up over time, as if having a severe allergic reaction. Their hands will swell up to the point where it becomes almost impossible to wield a sword after 2 posts. Their throat will swell, so that after 4 posts, they can no longer breath unless the have a method that does not require them to use their lungs. Finally, it will cause the heart to swell up, exploding after 10 psots. This toxin is only good for 1-2 injections per release.

Bankai Looks: It transforms Asano into a monstrous fusion of man and serpent, that looks like this
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during this time, he no longer possess' any legs, rather only a long tail, covered in spines. However, despite this, he still moves shockingly fast, faster than he would normally, and is still capable of speaking, though his voice becomes heavier, and raspy. He gains a thick carpace-like shell, which is denser than most arrancar's hierro, and provides mitigation for kido. However, unlike arrancar heierro, it has several vulnerable spots most notable under the neck, where there is little protection.

History and RP Sample

History: Human Arc- The prince of thieves.
Asano was born in Venice during the early 1700's, as a street rat. He never knew or met his parents, and was left out on the sidewalks in the winter of 1709. He may have died, were it not for the kindness of two other street dwellers, brother and sister teenagers Giovanni, and Amelia. He had no name, so they gave him one, based on something they had heard about a recent Italian expedition to Japan and named him after a warlord from there: 'Asano Kitano.' Life was incredibly hard as a street rat. Indeed, Asano would have not lived to see his first spring were it not for the benevolence of his two guardians. They were poor, and toughened from the streets, but still kind-hearted. They begged, they stole, they did what they could to get buy as Asano began to grow up. He learned the tricks of the trade early. At the age of four, he had already been exposed to enormous amounts of hardship, and was toughened to the degree that most adults can scarcely imagine. He had become an exceptionally talented pickpocket, bringing home more money than his two guardians on a daily basis despite his small size. However, despite the modest upbringing in which he grew up in, he desired to achieve something greater... He had seen the mansions in which the rich of Venice lived, and he realized that he had a deep hunger within himself to strive for more wealth, and power, so he could look the noble-born dead in the eye and show them how even a born street-rat could live at their level. And so, at the age of 12, the unnaturally cunning Asano began the thief's guild, its first two members his older adoptive brother and sister. Asano was in his own right a genius, in not only intellect but in street smarts. His underground guild grew rapidly, bringing in dozens of young outcasts who had been left by the wayside of Venice society. All youth, some older than himself, and some younger, who looked up to him like a father. The question of his authority arose only once-- a little over a year after the guild had formed. A 16 year old named Otto Braun, one night declared that he was more suitable to lead the thief's guild than was Asano, a challenge which Asano readily accepted. The two were given foils that the guild had procured, and told to fence to the death. The fight lasted not five seconds. No sooner had Otto begun charging, and they had been told to fight, Asano dropped his sword, and flicked his wrist. A dagger was stuck straight through the middle of Otto's neck. Asano removed his weapon, wiped it off with a cloth, and had two other members of the guild which now contained dozens remove the body. His authority was never questioned again. Life was good in the Thieves guild. As they grew in size, skill, and resources, Asano became more and more daring. 4 years after the birth of guild, They attempted a stunt that bordered in many's mind on insanity. The plan was to overthrow the small noble house of Montolio, and turn their mansion into a base of operations for the now prominent guild. They were armed, prepared, and they struck in the dead of night, armed with crossbows, poison daggers, and more. Teenagers overthrew guards. In a single night, the head of Montolio de Brauchee, head of the household, hung on a pike. Poor civilians across Venice, who had secretly been supporting the uprising against the nobility, rejoiced. The nobles, who had previously viewed the guild as a petty rabble of no more than a hundred, realized the true strength of it, and the dastardly cunning that its leader possessed. However, as the prominence and power of the thief's guild grew, so did the arrogance of its leader. He raided trade caravans, and began to take true control over the streets of Venice. He had his own private army, numbering in over a hundred of top-notch assassins and thieves. The noble houses were in chaos, their trade with other noble houses was falling apart, and their functionality had been almost completely halted by the Thieves guild. Finally, when they could tolerate it no longer, the Nobles of Venice united against the thieves guild. Up to this point, Giovanni and Amelia had been warning him to proceed cautiously, and not inccur the nobles wrath, but he took no heed of their advice. He believed himself mightier and more cunning than any mere noble household. And so, it was on the night of his 19th birthday, that the Nobles struck back. A united army of over 2000 stormed the Thieves Guild stronghold. Asano's soldiers did the best they could to hold them off, killing hundreds with careful traps and skill, but in the end sheer numbers won out. Catapults, and archers assaulted the walls. Dozens died. Dozens more, who held their own self-preservation above all, fled. Asano stayed. He had accomplished his dream, he believed, and though he would die young, he would die with his ambition realized. He fought vigorously, like a madman, cutting down dozens. finally, after recieving many wounds from many soldiers, he fell between the over-whelming number, but not before seeing Giovanni and Amelia die, and a twinge of great regret aching through his heart.

Rukongai/Seireitei Arc: After he arrived in the soul society, Asano was sorted into district 43. He felt as if he had been forced to start life anew. However, the power he had gained in Venice, he planned to acquire here- using the same charisma and cunning he had used to gain dominance in Venice to do the same here. For a time things went well. He started a criminal organization named the Grinning Wolves. Using the same tactics he had to rule the streets of Venice, he begain to gain a large amount of power in the relatively weak district 43. It was then he had his rude awakening as to how differrent the soul society was to the world of the living in the form of one man: Fujimaru Kudo. One man, who completely decimated his entire organization with a few swings of his sword. Asano was left awestruck, and barely managed to escape from the Grinning Wolves base of operations with his life- mostly due to his own large spiritual pressure. Ever since then, he has realized that as a soul, the only way to attain true power is through personal strength, that strength in numbers no longer had any meaning, and thus he joined the thirteen court guard squards, striving to attain the power he had seen demonstrated first hand. Since then, he has worked endlessly to attain greater heights of power. Ironically, over the past few hundred years, he has risen to the rank of lieutenant, and placed under the very man who came very close to killing him. Asano currently plans to shortly challenge his captain, and have bittersweet revenge for what happened all those years ago.

RP Sample: The wind blew at the tips of his hair, casting them up behind him. Asano ignored it, standing motionless in the center of the training grounds, eyes closed lightly shut, staying completely attentive with his other four senses. He heard the footsteps of his other squad members, as the circled around him. Felt their spiritual pressure, on the outskirts of his conscience. Smelled the sweat, dripping off their brows. He held his twin blades lightly, in a ready stance, pointed outward from his sides, facing two of his three opponents. All, save Asano, were panting heavily. Asano heard a cry from his back, and a rush of sprinting footsteps, as one of his training partners charged towards him. Elegantly whirling on the balls of his feet, he spun to meet the attacker, feeling the 'whoosh' of air as the man swung towards him, and, perfectly predicting the blades course, parrying with his off-hand weapon. The two swords grated, neither gaining any headway. Unfortunately for his attacker, Asano wielded two blades. He brought his main hand blade up in a quick strike, smacking across his opponents face with the flat his blade, sending the younger shinigami reeling. Without missing a beat, he kicked backward, catching another man in the gut, knocking the wind right out of the second shinigami, who had sought to take advantage of his partners bold assault. And then there was one. The third man circled with Asano, who, with a small smile on his face, launched into his own, blind, attack routine. His blades spun in dazzling whirlwinds, glinting in the morning sun. His opponent desperately tried to counter, but he was incapable of holding his own for long. Finally, after about 30 seconds of of attempting to hold off Asano, the man could do no more, and the engagement ended with a single one of Asano's blades an inch from his throat. Asano's eyes flicked open, and he looked bemusedly at the look of horror and shock which had flitted across the slightly chubby 8th seats face. He withdrew his sword, and sheathed both blades, and called out to the other squad members, who were struggling to catch their breath. "Good work today. This training session is finished." Without another word spoken, he turned, and entered back into the barracks.


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Post by pro150 on Mon Feb 01, 2010 1:03 am

sorry for taking so long to do this, but I am finally finished

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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Mon Feb 01, 2010 11:08 pm

First off, please change Accuracy to Dexterity, as that has been changed. If that is not in the template, I will addreess that issure later. PLease also make sure you are familiarized with the dexterity rules before continuing.

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Post by pro150 on Mon Feb 01, 2010 11:36 pm

alright, edited, didn't see it in the template but have familiarized myself with the rules.

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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Fri Feb 05, 2010 7:10 pm

This poison is relatively quick moving (1-2 posts for complete effect) but is not very harmful.

You want to be able to numb the entire body and part brain in 2 posts? Not happening. Too fast for total paralysis.

It inflicts some minor damage to muscle cells as it moves (-1.5 strength and speed as it moves) and takes three posts to completely spread.

3 posts to completely spread and cause great pain? Along with ability to render the opponent incapable of fighting? Again, too fast. Especally for a Shikai level.

It is exceptionally fast moving, taking a mere 2 posts to reach these muscles, and after one post, the enemy's speed and strength will have been reduced a great deal

Do i need to say it? Fast. This is more so Bankai level. 2 posts to reach all of the opponents muscles and paralyze them? No.

Im not even going to touch the Bankai for the moment.

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Post by pro150 on Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:34 am

numbing poison doesn't cause any real paralysis. it simply causes dulled reaction times, and minor trouble with fine motor skills, its main use is in the ability to cut off opponents speaking capacities. lengthened the times on the other two.

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Post by Aki on Thu Feb 11, 2010 3:33 am

asked to look at this

While unreleased, Nigenteki Dokuga has a mild poison permanantly coating its blade. This poison protects the blades, from any acid like substances that would try to disintegrate them. This poison is believed to be forged into the blade itself, and therefore cannot be washed away by any means. This poison, however, is also rather mild. When cut, the victim would feel mild spreading pain over the area surrounding the cut (similar to what one would feel from a sunburn) over a time of four posts, slight numbness and nausea will follow. Though this toxic is not strong, if multiple hits are gained, it can have extremely damaging effects (i.e. 8-10 wounds= vomitting, intense full body pain, etc.)

Ok first off if its permanently coated mind explain what’s preventing it from dripping off as you move the blade?. You know holding it in a common stance where the blade above your hands and making the poison drip on yourself. Cause really if you wanted it to some how just stick to the blade and be staying wet enough to be transferred though the blood somehow without it all coming off after a few cuts and swings then there’s got to be an reason like the blades makes the poison constantly.

And if its forged in it permanent how exactly would it poison anything if it didn’t leave the blade and enter the body?

And how much poison would need to be in the body to cause such pains to it for the more seriously stuff? Cause I really don’t want to see the person just getting nipped 8 times with the sword’s tip then screaming for his lungs out in pain. might want to clarify how bad of cuts.

Now first off as general things any Stamina costs you use will need to be spent PER USAGE of any ability you have, meaning if you spend it to use on ability once already you need to spend the same cost again to use it again considering how unfairly strong all this is. Also if you switch poisons do you need remove the current one? Can you use more then one poison at a time?

Numbing Poison: This poison is relatively quick moving (1-2 posts for complete effect) but is not very harmful. However, used against the right opponent, it can be incredibly effective. What it does, is it numbs the bodies muscles, causing some slight loss of fine motor skills, and slowing reaction times, and the brain slightly. This slows reaction times by a healthy amount, but, must importantly, is the effect it has on the mouth. It numbs the tongue and mouth the degree where it becomes impossible pronounce language at all. This is enormously effective against kido reliant opponents, for it totally cuts off their ability to use kido for as long as it is afflicting them, unless they have a method of performing the kido without speech. This applies to any other abilities which requires the opponents to say something, including zanpakutou releases. (note, due to the ability of captains and those who possess bankai to release their zanpakutou without calling its name, such opponents are still able to release their shikai) Lasts 4 posts. 2 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is a bright green.

Alright I’m not liking the fact that with this one ability at such a small cost that you are able to suppress kido and releases utterly so tone this down a lot since you’d be taking around half of people’s ability to fight with no real way to counter it as you haven’t again put down how much of a dosage u’d need to stop the tongue and also how much would their reaction time decrease from this? as well considering there is something that may kind of ruin your logic. It was my impression that a person only need to focus on the spell that kido that there are using by picturing the vivid pictures a person says, it does have to be spoken as that method is a stronger way to picture then just thinking of the words in your head but that would also mean that they really don’t need to pronounce the worlds correctly to anyone but themselves so in my interpretation they could fumble and limp their incantations and still get that level of focus, same with releases. Course I’d need to ask if it really is just about speaking perfect English

Agonizing Poison: This poison specializes in inflicting vast amounts of pain, and doing relatively high levels of tissue and organ damage to opponents, though not enough to be lethal with a single dose. Upon beng cut, the poison moves somewhat slowly throughout the opponents body. The pain starts from the point of rupture, and gradually spreads throughout the entire body. It inflicts some minor damage to muscle cells as it moves (-1.5 strength and speed as it moves) and takes four posts to completely spread. However, the pain is greatest once the toxin reaches the organs, at which point the agony will render many enemies incapable of continuing combat. Upon reaching the organs, it causes a reasonable amount of tissue damage. For several days, the opponent willbe incapable of using their digestive tract. Additionally, lung capacity is reduced, making their breathes more shallow, and causing them to tire when engaged in physical combat more quickly. It takes 4 posts to completely spread. Lasts 6 posts (including spread time) 3.5 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is orange.

Ya… your going to need a lot more stuff to balance out this out. Organ damage and cellular harm? Organ failure… decreases oxygen in take…damaged muscle cells…and all in for post for tiny cost. from that this won’t go though, tone down the severity since just as is this would imply you could kill the person fairly easily considering living even supernatural (humans, shinigmia, hollows) beings would normally dead soon enough with organ damage especially during battle.

Paralytic Poison: This poison specializes in going after the muscles of the opponents body and rendering them useless as quickly as possible, to prevent motion, and allow Asano to toy with opponents as he chooses. one main advantage to this poison is that it is particularly long lasting, staying in the opponents body for up to 6 posts. this poison focuses on flowing to the muscles of the calves, hamstrings, thighs, biceps, triceps, and wrists, effectively neutralizing motion of the arms and legs once it has reached theses muscles. It is exceptionally fast moving, taking a mere 2 posts to reach these muscles, one post after which, the enemy's speed and strength will have been reduced a great deal, a second post after which, they will be incapable of using these muscles at all unless through a method such hiryenyaku. 3 stamina cost to apply to a weapon. This toxin is purple.

Ok directly target muscle poison and rendering them like limbless for 6 post and in like what one posts? Nope not getting this either, make it so you have to hit the targeting muscle in order to poison it, if you hit near it then it weakens fine, but utter immobilization? No


Lethal Toxin: This toxin is by far and away the most deadly in Asano's arsenal. It flows continually through the blood, until it reaches either the brain or the heart. However, due to it's slow speed, it is quite possible for death to be avoided by those with medical experience, or those seek medical aid with enough time left. Once it reaches the brain or the heart however, it disentegrates the tissue at an astonishing rate, killing the target in under a minute. It moves extremely slowly, at 1 centimeter a post, so unless the blow is particularly close to either vital spot, it will take quite sometime for it to kill. This poison is very slick, and falls off of Asano's blades in only 2 posts. 5 Stamina cost to generate. It is completely unnoticeable until it kills.

Death? No way to notice it? Under a minute? Nope take this out not getting this


Poison Spit: While in bankai, Asano's strange body generates enormous amounts of toxins on its own. So much, in fact, that he can shoot large amounts of it out in liquid form during his attacks. This poison spit, moves in glob-like clusters, is guided by is reaitsu. Due to the fact that it is not going to be able to enter the blood stream easily, this poison becomes acidic once exposed to the air, burning rather rapidly through clothing, or even hierro, and then into the soft tissue underneath. After it breaches the skin, it causes the tissue underneath to sting violently, and moves quickly to slow the target down (takes 2 posts to burn through skin, minus 20% speed if it does so. Can do significant damage. 2 stamina cost)

How far can this travel? How much can you ever make in one post? (volume please) how well its homing effect that you control and take put the part that it slows the person down. Pain on the skin would not slow a fighter down or a sword slash would continently make a person slower and slower and slower and from what we have all seen that is hardly the case

Venomous Gale: While in bankai, Asano can shoot out condensed orbs of poisonous reaitsu. These orbs are highly condensed, and therefore are black These move extremely quickly towards the target. As it moves, it releases a a toxic gas, which spreads out around it. If hit by the orb itself, the person will have the toxin move extremely rapidly through their system. Causes initial damage to the persons vitals if it contacts with them as well. total effect spread out over 8 posts after inhalation, or 3 posts after direct contact. Lasts for 8 posts. Speed/strenght are slowed down by 5 percent per post as toxin spreads. The toxin will gradually damage the afflicteds liver, an extremely important target, as, once the liver is damaged or destroyed, the opponent will be incapable of filtering further poisons that are funneled into their body. Causes minor damage to other organs as well. 3.5 stamina cost.

How fast can they move? How far does the gas extend out from the orbs? And take out the organ damage, especially the liver since that gone poison won’t matter they would die, look it up if you don’t believe me about what happens when the liver stops working

Viper Strike: This is pherhaps Asano's most lethal toxin. it can only be released through his teeth. He must then bite the target within 2 psots, and maintain contact in the bite for at least a second. If these conditions are met, the target will face nausea and hallucinations in one, total paralysis in two, and the death within 4 posts. This toxin is extremely hard to create, and therefore must not be used lightly. 8 stamina cost.

Take out the instant death, how long does the posien stay in your fangs?

Poisonous spines: As can be noted in the picture, the majority of Asano's serpentine body is covered in spines and spikes. These can be shot out from several different points on his body as projectile weapons. These can be shot out from several places. One such place is his lengthy tail, the other is his mask area. These spines, while not terribly large (large as a small dagger each) can be covered with anyone of his four standard poisons. However, once a poison is selected for the spines, while it costs him no stamina, he cannot change it until he next releases bankai.

Your not getting cost free effects for your type of Poison and making them even better projectiles so limitless. How many spikes do you get to use? how often can u use this and how fast can they be fired off from ya?

Poison Nova: This is one of Asano's few gaseous poison abilities. Using reaitsu, he turns a large amount of liquid poison in his body into gas, and then excretes these deadly fumes in every direction around himself. The fumes spread out and travel over a distance of 50 yards in every direction. The poison is paralytic over the course of 3 posts, and lethal over the course of 9, even with only a small amount in the sytem. 6 stamina cost.

Can you move while your emitting the posicne? Is it noticeable, like a green gas coming out of ya? By paralytic do you mean no movement at all. Up the cost

Poison Tail: Asano, whille in bankai, has a long 12 foot tail extend out behind him. This tail is extremely muscular. Also, the tip of it is quite sharp, and filled with a unique toxin unlike any other Asano possesses. This toxin causes the opponent to swell up over time, as if having a severe allergic reaction. Their hands will swell up to the point where it becomes almost impossible to wield a sword after 2 posts. Their throat will swell, so that after 4 posts, they can no longer breath unless the have a method that does not require them to use their lungs. Finally, it will cause the heart to swell up, exploding after 10 psots. This toxin is only good for 1-2 injections per release.

Tone this down >.> i'm sure you know why by now in my methods
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Re: Asano Kitano, Squad 7 Lieutenant (Finished)

Post by Aki on Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:22 am

i've been corrected, follow kou's words and with some of mine if you don't mind



xD he is allowed to have the death side effects due to the poison, but he needs to fully explain why, how, and make it reasonable.

Kinshin is able to kill someone in 10 posts with his poison. This however is due to the spreading of the poison to the nerve centers throughout the body, causing immense amounts of pain to build up within the bodyand limbs as it spreads, causing the 10 post death. However, the poison needs to be injected, and the opponent cut with the sword before this happens.

So pro's lethal toxin, as it move 1cm a post, so long as he puts in there that it can be removed easily, etc, and fully explains the effects of ow and why they die and makes it reasonable, could be allowed. But he should make it a post length, and be able to describe how and why the poison kills in that amount of time.
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Post by DewBunny on Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:29 am

....Does anyone read? you may bump ONCE! if after that bump you are still waiting you contact an admin via pm. v.v' i swear

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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:24 am

Sousuke, its a bump once every 24 hours, or contact an admin. Unless you changed that on me

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we did due to the double posting

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