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Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:21 am

Shinigami Profile

Name: Shion Ishida

Age: he appears to be 16 but is actually 130

Gender: male

Division: 4

Seat: Captain

Looks: Shion is about 6 feet with shoes on.He looks young blinding people to his true age.He is very wise but also very playfull.His styles both light and dark. As his captains robe is white. But under that he wears the clothing of the low level stealth force which is black.He has long purple hair which he usually ties up it sometimes gets in the way during fighting.With armor all around his body but hidden very well. the armor is heavy enough to take hits while still being light enough to move around swiftly, He has a I just woke up from bed kinda style which suits his reckless yet, calm nature.


Personality:
Shion is a really nice guy which throws people off because of his emmence spiritual pressure which at one point threatened to destroy the seretai.A powerlimit was placed on him even there as it had been done to those going to the world of the living,Shion loves fighting and will fight all day if permitted. this earned him the respect of his former head captain kenpachi zaraki.The power limit put on him makes him walk around with half his potential spiritual pressure.When he gets mad enough though the seal will break at which point the head captain of the 13 court squads will have to intervene.He loves pretty girls and will kill anyone who interferes while hes talking to one.You can usually find him easily hes where the girls are.

Stats
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Strength:

10
Speed:
35
Accuracy:
25
Stamina:
25

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: (The name of your Zanpakuto)
Shadrale the dyrad blade
Zanpakuto Looks:
Is a long slender sword which is gold at the hilt. However its not long enough to poke through his robe.It stays on a mechanism that shoots from his arm when needed and the sheath is nowhere to be seen untill the blade is released into its Shikai form.Shion calls it the illusion of death and if you see it in action youll know why.


Zanpakuto Description: Shadrale is one of the few Zanpakuto that lacks a purely offensive ability, and due to this lacking, is not highly desired by any Shinigami for use. Those who do use the blade, however, find that her abilities are quite unique and useful in more ways than assumed just by knowing tid-bits of information about the sword.

Green Cut: A remarkable ability that is usually regarded as useless when used in the wrong hands. When Shadrale cuts a plant, and removes a portion of the plant with this, the damage is rapidly healed through a shimmer of green dust that forms into whatever part was taken. This is useful for Shinigami who use plant-based attacks and want to preserve reiatsu.


Released Zanpakuto Description:
Once released, Shadrale's appearance shifts from a simple straight blade into the more unique form the sword is most comfortable with. When released, the sword gains a few new abilities that is able to use, further increasing it's abilities.

Mind Rotting Bite: When Shadrale deals damage through it's cut to an opponent, the sword damage appears as normal for 3 posts, until afterwards the wound begins to glow green and knit itself. In contrast, however, once the wound knits, poisonous spores are sent through the body that affect the mind irresistibly, making the opponent believe that the damaged body part has just rotted away. This enables the sword to be used to heal allies (albeit with a side-effect) or to 'harm' opponents while leaving them in-tact.

Green Memory: When Shadrale is swung, a veil of green plant-like material is left in the blade's wake, creating a sort of secondary-attack. The more consecutive swings, the more veil is left behind, and when used skillfully this can form a barrier around the user or the opponent, or penalize opponents who dodge attacks with small movements.



Sakura Wind: Instead of making an attack with Shadrale, the wielder may instead hold the blade up into the air and cause the various leaves on the sword to fly off in the wind, glowing pink as they do so. This ability can only be used once per thread and must be done before the sword can be used for Bankai.

Each petal releases an aphrodisiac, causing the opponent to lose their combat intent, and to see the Zanpakuto's spirit, that of the lovely dryad, instead of their opponent who is wielding Shadrale. If the opponent is female, the spirit simple shifts its appearance to appear as a stocky male. As long as the petals remain in the air, the effect remains.
Speed+5
acuracy+5
Zanpakuto Release Phrase:
"Death comes Swiftly, Breathe Shadrale!!"

"Pouring basin, down to earth
Crashing thunder, spirit's birth
Mother's kiss and father's stare
Bloom forth beneath the velvet air
Veil, Shadrale!"

Released Zanpakuto Looks:
The sword grows longer to become the equal of its owners legs.In this form it cant be in shions robe anymore. in order to release it one must run it along the length of their arm.While completing the phrase.


Zanpakuto Spirit:
Is a carefree female spirit which has a short temper.She often scolds shion because while shes trying to teach him.Hes hitting on her or staring at her chest.She sometimes will also hit on him, but in a joking way.Its unclear what her true feelings are.As she is a spirit but the companionship and humor of shion brings a spark of intrest to a other wise boring and lonely world.She told shion her name and blushed when he told her he thought it was beautifull.


Zanpakuto Realm:
Her realm is a pink hell, Shion hates going there as its so girly.But hes never told her that.But he gets the feeling she might know some how.


Bankai Information


Bankai Description:
When Shadrale is used for Bankai, she must first have used Sakura Wind, as stated in the abilities description. Once this has been done, each flower petal multiples, and those petals multiple, and so on and so forth until an enormous tree is formed in the center of the battlefield. The tree is roughly 50ft tall with hundreds of branches that each house a smiling, partially-naked, dryad of the male or female variety depending on the opponent.

Once this tree is created, called the Great Dryad Hollow, a variety of effects may be used...

Dryad Hypnosis: With a glance into any of the dryad's eyes, a bond is made that causes the opponent to believe that they are madly in love with the creature, and that the dryad is in love with them. Even opponents from other species are not immune to this effect, and this prevents the opponent from directly harming the tree. Any attack made to harm the tree is conflicted by the inner mind and the 'heart', making it impossible to perform.

Dryad Hospitality: Any designated group of persons the user desires may be snatched up by the dryads and brought inside of the tree where they are catered to in every manner and allowed a rapidly induced rest. This rest heals all wounds dealt to the persons within a post that do not include de-limbing, decapitation, or similar extreme injuries. These injuries are healed over the course of 3 posts instead, and any poisons, bleeding, etc. are halted while this healing occurs.

Due to the Great Dryad Hollow's first ability, the tree will not be harmed, allowing for healing in peace, though the Shinigami using the technique is not so blessed. Any missing limbs healed by the tree gain a grainy, bark-like texture and appear brown and unhealthy. In the spring, the limb sprouts pink blossoms, in the fall the blossoms fall off, and in the winter the limb is wholly barren again. Otherwise, it functions as a normal limb.

Dryad Sentience: Each dryad in and on the Great Dryad Hollow has its own individual mind, capable of free-thought and will, though their personality rarely causes them to conflict with their user. The dryad themselves have no weapons, nor can they be directed to harm an opponent, but they can be asked to do other things such as retrieve things, send messages, etc. They will NOT do an action they perceive as directly harmful to them.

Bankai Looks:
Dependant on the user, the tree can resemble any tree desired, and the dryad occupying it tend to each have their own appearance. The dryad commonly take seductive poses or lounge around in the tree, or running about it.

Alterations:

Accuracy: +5
Stamina: +15
History and RP Sample

History:
Shion began life in the fon clan his mother, a shinigami of the unique stealth force. And his father a quincy of the land of the living.In a world full of hate between the two they somehow found love.The quincy and soulreeper hadnt always had there differences at one point, the two fought on the same ground they both lived for one dream to protect the innocent from there inpending doom.But there was one big difference in the way the two sides saw this should be met.The soulreepers sought peace and spiritual ballance.With the zonpacto they would first cleanse the soul of the wrong they commited as a hollow before sending them to the soul society,The quincy didnt agree and thought of it as stupid to show such a coutesy to their attackers and instead thought to only destroy them.Thus throwing off the balance of the spirit world by sending too many souls strait to the underworld.The soulreapers told the quincy many times of what their actions would result in.But sadly to no avail and so a war was declared. Shion was born on a very dark day, where his mothers sister was ordered to kill his father.In the order of the eradication of all quincy and there kind.The two had disapeared into the land of the living with their unborn child.They were trying to escape to a place they could be together and raise there family in peace without becoming involved in the two sides war. This was not the case they trusted the wrong person and this resulted in their emminent capture. Shions mother Ayame Fon and Aorra Ishida. Aorra was executed on spot after attempting to stand up to the captain who came to claim his subbortinate soul reaper.And Ayame was taken back to the society after being forced from her gigai.A long trial insued with her in the repentance cell.Which was where she had her kid.With the ongoing war noone cared or noticed she was pregnat they all only assumed she put on weight.They only noticed something was out of the ordinary when shions screams shook the seretai.Shion was snatched from the floor and taken to the hospitol.And the woman died from shock and having no help.

The infant child Shion was raised by his mothers, brother Kanna fon.Shion grew up thinking of this man as his father.And was never corrected.He was in the stealth force but wasnt a valuble member. Still his influence on them and indeed the entire soul society made him a house hold name.Not only was he well respected but his opinions and abilty to access situations made him one of the only members not born into royalty. to speak on equal ground as a member of the noble families.Shion grew up idolizing him and traing relentlessly with him. Everyday he would become stronger under his influence.Eventually kana rose through the ranks and became the leader of the stealth force.The rest not only resented this decission but began to hate him. Shion was of the age of 10 when he truely began to master the fighting arts.And began going on missions with them following the head leader Yoroichi the princess.He became friends with another child of the same age named Soi fon. She made incredible progress and became his rival. Eventually Shion learned the truth about the night his father was murdered while kneeling at the side of Kanna who was destroyed in a freak hollow accident.The hollow was like nothing ever seen. He had no remorse for the quincy as they were destroying the peace and wouldn't listen to reason.Shions quincy power is dormant and one day may rise to the top.At age 15 he became a soul reaper acing exams in shunpo and swordman ship his kido needed work. He trained harder then ever taking his skills to the next level with the stealth force.

Eventually he was given an oppertunity to work under the current leader of that division and quickly became stronger.One fatefull day his efforts were awarded with the full awakening of his shinigami powers. The shock of the event and the pure power that flowed into him.When he first met his sword Shadrale.He trained hard and hoped for this day for 50 years.But wasnt ready as his body was unable to withhold the power and he collapsed to the ground.Shion remembers the day vividly.It was raining the rain made it so nothing was visable.And in the midst stood a pretty girl.Shions eyes immediatly lit up at her beauty and he began holding her hand and trying to sweet talk her.She didnt yet reveal her identity she just smiled as she said her name.and asked him if he was ready now.He looked at her and asked her what she was talking about.She didnt respond and instead fused with him. when it happend the seretai shook and shion was unconcious for 10 years.This time was not spent doing nothing though while in his mind he trained with Shadrale every second he lived in that world for 10 years and vowed if he ever sees another flower it will be too soon. When he awoke his power was undeniable and his speed was nothing short of amazing. He quicky rose through the ranks and became a lutenant.The captain feared shions power and so he decided to attempt to kill him.

But was nowhere near strong enough and found out the hardway.When shion cut him in half using his newly awaken powers.When he released shadrale the captain became infatuated with the spirit and the image.This was all the time shion needed.He was thought of as a traitor and a murderer, but after a long going investigation shion proved he was not the one who ignitated it. Though it was only circumstancial evidence, he is now the vice captain and is watched every second. Hes also the leader of the stealth force and master of the flash step.He spends most of his days wondering about the fate of his fallen fathers race.
And if hes destined to end the same way. Hes in no way proud to be a quincy still he wishes he had gotten to meet his father.Shion spent many days training for wars and fighting hollows. Not many more impressive then when the Arrancar made a foolish mistake of challenging him.It was a stalemate between the two sides as shions bankai level was not enough to hold off the emmence power of the arancar, who threatened his life.

His ability was that of unimaginable power he had the power to transform into a dragon.Which earned the arrancar the title of dragon warrior.The fight ended when shions blade cut the tooth from the dragons mouth making him instantly turn back into the weak frail arrancar the battle started as. Shion was know as the Dragon champion and given the nick name of Gaia.After that things were not in anyway quiet the hollows flowed more than ever.
There number seemed to increase everyday.Shion had no time to sleep between his duities to his squad and the duities to destroy the stupid blood hungry hollows.And as such eventually fell into a great depression where he attempted to take his own life.This was stopped by the kind hand of his best friends and a few women who cried. Shion vowed to never see a woman cry again, and to this day has upheld that which he made at his fathers tombstone.He and his sword get along great they started off with no love, but through hard training and life altering situations there is none closer to him.

RP Sample:
Shion entered the class and was immediatly hit by the sickening stench of failire.This was the class where all the kids not smart enough to be gennin resided.Not only was this shions second time around.But he should have been a chunnin at his current power level he was way stronger then any of the losers who were allready disgracing that rank with their mediocre at best skills.He crushed chips on his way to his desk that was too small for him and his massive ego.Shion was by far the cockiest of all of the students in the entirre academy.He was told more than once of this fact."Why the hell do i have to be here Ishida sensai you know im better than all these losers... my skills are beyond even you jonin"Shion protested with a scowl.
"Well nice to see i have to deal with you Shion, Can you stop complaining for one day"Ishida responded to the impatient child who had pissed off many a jonin his confidence was beginning to become a problem.But it was true his skill was truely undeniable."If not for this fact i would drop this stupid kid from the program so quick" ishida stated under his breath talking to himself."What was that sensai... " shion yelled holding his ear to see if he would repeat it. Ishida snapped back to reality waving him off "nothing nothing" at all thats the last thing i would need is for him to know how highly we value him."Shut up and sit down shion!!!" Ishida yelled

Shion sat down quick as the rest of the idiots in his class laughed."Shut the hell up all of you you all suck not one of you are any match for the great Uchiha hope.The hero of konaha you stupid losers" shion folded his arms and sunk into his seat.Ishida rubbed his head "this kid is going to be the death of me"...Ok class im very proud of all of you not only did you all get the transformation and escape techniques, but you all mastered them and so."the teacher smiled proudly."I am very happy to say I have been given permission to teach you all a technique of real destruction" he continued pulling out a shuriken.Shions eyes pierced the shuriken in his hand with sharingan...hmm he scoffed"This combo was given to us by two young leaf shinobi,one of whom then went awall but the other one" he said with a smile remembering the great hero, and best ninja to date."now watch carefully demon wind shuriken" he whispered as the one shuriken changed some how."Your finally going to teach us a technique thats usefull in some way" shion yelled throwing off the teachers concentration.
"Shion im going to kill you" Ishida growled humourously he in no way hated the young prodigy but found teaching him to be an impossible task.He quickly turned his attention to a child in the 3rd row."Watch out Oaki" he yelled as he threw the shuriken in his direction. The boy got scared and hid under his desk."haha take that oaki you jerk" shion laughed."What" a voice said as he appeared and evaded the shuriken.

"What!!! How could you see me" he asked ,"my technique was flawless" he assured himself.As he spoke he failed to see the shuriken hidden in the shadow of the first, until it was too late. Before it hit the ninja did a handseal and summoned wind to blow it over his head.
"Hah" he said cocky "dont underestimate me" the mysterious ninja started running towards the teacher..nows my chance shion thought if i can stop this guy ill get the recognition i deserve.He waited for his chance to strike when the teaacher made his true move. The teacher appeared behind the intruder coming out of the shuriken."What" the man said as the teacher delivered a staggering kick to his back which made the ninja fly to the front of the class."Hahaha well done Ishida" the ninja said turning into the 10th."Thank you Hokage" the teacher said bowwing. "And that class is the shadow shuriken jutsu, and how about a big hand for our hokage the 10th what a great performance"
The hokage smiled and disappeared.Shion for once was speachless stuck in amazement that move was completly awesome he thought.
"Now you all try." the teacher sat trying to catch his breath.The class tried to get the jutsu but most were stuck on how to first change their shuriken.

Shion knew better to do this jutsu, the Shuriken dosen't change you change into a shuriken then make a clone to throw the shuriken along with you hidden in the shadow,its a pretty complicated jutsu Shion sat down and thought about it.How did this overrated guy do it so effortlessly if he had turned into a clone theres no way we wouldnt have seen he thought."hmm teacher i have to go to the washroom" Shion asked."Just hold it Shion this is important you want to make gennin soon" the teacher insisted."But i really gotta go sensai" he insisted. "Fine go,but hurry up" the teacher agreed. Shion ran out of the room "ahh these kids and there weak bladders haha" he said laughing to himself."i gotta remember hes just a kid even if his skills are beyond that" Shion came back in the room about 10 minutes later.
"Nice of you to join us Shion are you ready to get to work now"Ishida inquired "hummph" Shion said smiling, "Go DEMON WIND SHURIKEN" he said and threw the blade at his sensai "huh" the teacher said being on the other end of a flying shuriken.But it was a simple thing to dodge.
The teacher evaded it easilly then noticed that another one was coming but not fast enough to do damage he simply ducked it.
Nice Shion he thought as the clone disapeared after throwing it.Shion appeared behind the teacher and tapped him on the shoulder with a big smile"So whats next" he asked."Nice Shion maybe you would like to tell us how you figured it out" sensai asked."Well i would but i would rather talk to the teacher then his clone" he said."Hahaha" poof the clone disappeared and the teacher appeared as the chair."So you really did figure out how it works" the teacher said."Yep the one teaching has been a clone this whole time I hate to admit it but that is some chakra control you have sensai" Shions respect for the sensai grew another notch this day.


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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by DewBunny on Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:33 pm

First History you need a lot more of it. this is a captain not an infant so make me believe that. Second you'll forgive me for saying this but looking at both your spelling and Rp Sample i can tell you now you are not up to a captain class character yet so drop the rank back. Also this rank is currently occupied.

Akumu Tenshiki is one of the evilest and most currupt swords he was sealed into a sword long ago and hates the world that imprisoned her.Its abilitys are the decieving nature it has. as it will not look like a sword until released so fools make the mistake of attacking without knowing the user is armed.It increases its users speeds to incredible levels.Almost to ichigos bankai lv.

First, Your zanpaktou is not a sealed spirit that was killed so take that out. You're referencing a canon character's ability and honestly Ichigo's level will not work for you, especially considering the SHIKAI level. You will also need a stated stat increase for this boost

When Akumu is released it grows to a long slender sword. the handle becomes gold and the sheath appears around the users back.In its released form shion is faster then ichigos bankai level and is able to create images. also Akumo will begin to gather raichi from everything including its master.

Once again not only is that a Bankai but you want it in a shikai. you need to stat a value and drop the Reishi gathering because honestly draining others and sustaining yourself is overpowering.

The dagger grows out to become the equal of shions legs.The handle become gold and goes in a weird shape like the top of a trappazoid.the blade is sharp as hell. and is untouchable by anyone or anything.including shion he has never made the mistake of touching it though.As he was warned one time by the head of the 13 squads.

Yeah no offense but your description sucks. if you can't touch it how can you use it and the shape makes no sense so describe better or find a picture

Is a complete asshole she craves blood and the destruction of the spirit world. She once attemted to destroy the serretai. by releasing hollows and grand minos all around the soul socciety. For her crimes she was put to death by the sokioku however she did not die she only grew stronger absorbing the power of the sokioku. Once she had all the power a rogue Shinigami and quincy performed a sealing ritual. imprisoning her in her own sword. she has now become her sword and wonders an infinte universe of doors and mazes if he ever finds his way out she will become a god.

Yeah.....Gonna answer this with a quote from out lovely site owner

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Soukyouku is not gonna be referenced for starters but it is the most powerful of Zanpaktou's equivalent to 1,000,000 releases all at once. You're not gonna get powerful off it and Ichigo could only repel it so don't look foolish bringing that in.

Shion can reach speeds of the head captain.And the sword will begin completly draing everyone of their spiritual pressure as such shion is not aloud to use bankai.Or will be judged a threat to the soul society and be put to death

Seriously were you trying to get chewed out? Head captain level? aww heyull naw. You're gonne fix this application kid cus it stopped being funny at Soukyouku. If you need a Zanpaktou we have several approved in the Zanpaktou section below characters because honestly i'll tell you this is not getting approved

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:38 pm

allright then would it be allright if i used Shiro Kitsune..
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:12 pm

also theres now twice as much history and i will change the rest if i get the sword i asked for earlier. oh also i fixed the spelling mistakes i am at a captain level.And will do what must be done to prove it
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:17 pm

Even though i no longer have moderator powers, 4th Division Captain has already been taken.

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:19 pm

that sux but dosent matter ill be any captain
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Traca Carmesim on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:28 pm

Legion wrote:First History you need a lot more of it. this is a captain not an infant so make me believe that. Second you'll forgive me for saying this but looking at both your spelling and Rp Sample i can tell you now you are not up to a captain class character yet so drop the rank back. Also this rank is currently occupied.
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by DewBunny on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:31 pm

Shiro Kitsune is on a character and is designed for my vaizard so no

Also with this app you'd be lucky to get a fifth seat

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:33 pm

ahh thats not nice fine i will try again but first what swords are still available then
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by DewBunny on Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:06 pm

All except Shiro, Haiiro, Iwa Assaiki, Tenson, Kagutsuchi, and Koodori Sousei

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:04 am

ok this is done i think i nailed it this time :no-no:
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:18 am

oh i just seen that the entire rank is filled lol fine ill be vice captain then
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Kenji Akira on Fri Jan 15, 2010 2:41 pm

Legion wrote:
Also with this app you'd be lucky to get a fifth seat
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 3:01 pm

really, still what more do i have to do can i see an example of a vice captain ap.
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by DewBunny on Fri Jan 15, 2010 4:16 pm

Like i've said it was both the rp sample and the history coupled with your complete lack of description that got me. now your history is fine and your rp sample sucks it you need help in that area you could ask myself, koujetsu, and Kaji for help

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Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 4:21 pm

i see what you mean ok i just need to fix the rp now
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Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 4:56 pm

ok hows that
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Post by DewBunny on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:02 pm

much....MUCH better

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:03 pm

Uh-uh, no, if you use MY Zanpakuto you use MY Zanpakuto, you do NOT edit a thing about it, So either fix this or don't use it all because the weapon is open for use as is, not with edits.
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:15 pm

ok traca ive fixed it if ur talking about the pic you dont have one for the ones i made.you have the released skikai but for sum reason it wouldnt transfer. i made the release phrase the same(tho is kinda long.. id prolly get cut in half before its done lol)as far as the boosts you only put the one for bankai but theres 2 other boosts like shikai and kyouu but i used the same one you used for bankai is that ok?
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:30 pm

I've added a code to the Zan, that was my own fault for not providing it in code. Anyhow, Kyuu is not presently implimented so you don't need to add Kyuu, and Shikai bonuses weren't implimented when the weapon was created thats fine as well.

The issue I see is the addition of a picture of the blade in Bankai, in Bankai the blade becomes the tree, you don't get a sword. There are no alterations when Bankai is used on yourself, hence that spot is blank in the app. The picture of the blade is now available with the code available, so edit it correctly as well.
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by DewBunny on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:33 pm

Take the kyuu stuff out you're not getting a kyuu release

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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by shotty on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:43 pm

ok then all done. question tho if in bankai there is no blade how do you kill anyone.you have to leave bankai to do it?
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Kenji Akira on Fri Jan 15, 2010 6:43 pm

Is a carefree female spirit which has a short temper.She often scolds shion because while shes trying to teach him.Hes hitting on her or staring at her chest.She sometimes will also hit on him, but in a joking way.Its unclear what her true feelings are.As she is a spirit but the companionship and humor of shion brings a spark of intrest to a other wise boring and lonely world.She told shion her name and blushed when he told her he thought it was beautifull.

Alright, whether you edit this or not doesn't matter, this is just too funny to not mention. Your Zanpaktou spirit is basically the materialization of your spiritual pressure. (Just a side note)



As for killing, it's your Bankai, figure it out.
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Re: Shion Ishida (vice captain of the 5th squad)

Post by Traca Carmesim on Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:08 pm

It's the Bankai I devised, its not designed to kill anyone, hence the statement that it is a defensive/healing Zanpakuto and NOT an offensive one. It's right there at the top, one of the first statements made, its not an offensive Zanpakuto.
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