Ayuri's Melee Weapon

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Ayuri's Melee Weapon

Post by Taichou on Fri Jan 08, 2010 10:19 pm

Name of Character: Ayuri Sashimoto

Current Rank: Rank 3 Quincy

Current Spiritual Pressure: Over 300 I assume

Name Of Weapon: Rir Rin Sakura (Azure Cherry Blossom)

Weapon Skill Level: Master (only by her)

Small Summary: This is one of the melee weapons(basically; katana, although smaller), that Ayuri carries around rarely. This is only used on desperate situations, such as meeting up with an espada, or someone stronger than herself. This technique has the ability to turn into a reddish glowing whip and where it interacts forms a red lush on the area. If it touches the hands, that part gets filled with the lush. The lushes are very painful, and extends upto the whole topic. There is no way on getting rid of it. The lushes are able to drain the spiritual pressure slowly, little by little. The more it drains the more powerful Ayuri gets and can fight longer.

The lushes, when they find no source of spiritual pressure, they extend their root more further in the body and continues to extend to the heart. Once it interacts with the heart, they are dead, immediately. Pain is ached during their extendment of the roots.

Note: Once the lush roots touch the heart, Ayuri will speak out La Muerte and immediately kill the person. La Muerte must be spoken, well-pronounced, and no mumbling.
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Re: Ayuri's Melee Weapon

Post by Sora on Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:56 pm

The fact that it CANT be stopped after hit is far too advanced for a Level 3 Quincy. On top of that, I don't think you should be able to automatically kill anyone by striking the heart at your rank.

But if this technique is to be permitted, please make an extremely long post count before it reaches the heart.
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Post by Taichou on Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:15 pm

I will like to get suggestions, of some revamp on this weapon. I assume ... 30 posts to reach it...? Or is it too long?
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Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:30 pm

Killing NPC's fine. Killing another player without their permission, nor giving any way to avoid it? Technically god modding. Coupled with no way to get rid of it? Too much.

Plus, you expect to drain someone of considerable reiatsu and kill them before they kill you? Cause thats what Im getting. While the idea is ok, what you have written down is a no go.

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Post by Taichou on Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:51 am

The roots will be gone if the spiritual pressure limit is over third seat, would that be fine?
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