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Post by powerninja on Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:44 pm

Basic Information

Name: Maneki Neko

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Appearance: Maneki id around 5 foot 7 and has black He also has black eyes.He is usually seen wearing a black kimono so h can confuse hollows into thinking he is a shinigami.
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Personality: Maneki is strange he always reacts the same way in any situation. He calmly thinks things through and comes up with a plan. Maneki does however have a 2ed personality that takes over in times of pain. This personality is very ruthless and will just try and kill what ever was causing the original personality pain. when the pain starter is gone the first personality comes out.

Rank: 4

Armor/Glove Information

Name: Swift darkness

Bow Manifestation: It looks like an average bow. Except its color is pure black and so is the strong. refer to pic

Description: Manekis bow fires arrows at a very fast speed.

Looks: When maneki has his bow active it looks like he is batman. His clothes change from a kimono to a black quincy clothes with a cape
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Techniques

Name: (Hirenkyaku )
Description: (Analogous to the Shinigami Flash Steps or the Arrancar Sonído, the Quincy Hirenkyaku allows the user to move quickly over short distances;)

Name: (Ransōtengai )
Description: (this is a high level technique that allows the user to control their body parts using strings of spirit energy controlled by their brain, forming lines or strings out of countless spiritrons. By using this technique, the user can control their body as one would a puppet, allowing them to move freely despite paralysis, broken limbs, or any other force that would impede normal movement.)

Name: (Shadow arrow blast)
Description: (This special technique gives manekis arrows the power to explode on contact ) kido lv 25 takes 2 stamina affects captain level people for 2 posts vc level people 3 posts everyone else 4 posts

Name: (Shadow arrow sight)
Description: (this is another arrow power that allows manekis arrows to cause temporary blindness after 5 of his arrows hit the target.Useing the power of darkness the arros blind whoever is hir for 2 posts.) kido lv 40 takes 3 stamina affects captain level people for 2 posts vc level people 3 posts everyone else 4 posts

Name: (Darkness blast)
Description: (this move fire 1 fast but powerful arrow that are capable of destroying building.The draw back is that your bow dispels for a while (2 posts) The arrow is the size of a kamehameha it is stronger at night and weaker at day. kido lv 60 takes 2 posts to charge and takes 4 stamina can be used twice per topic



Stats
(Depending on your rank, please distribute the amount of stats that you receive within the four options)

Strength:15

Speed:25

Accuracy:30

Stamina:10

History and RP Sample

History: (kid arc) Maneki was lucky and when the quincys were being killed he was lost in the woods. When maneki found his way home he found out that his parents had been killed by a hollow. Maneki was devastated when he found out. After that day he has been training his powers so he could kill all hollows.

(Teenage arc) It had been 10 years since manekis parents were killed and he was 15. Maneki had found a group of quincy survivors when he was 5.Ever since then they have been training him to use his quincy powers. After 10 years of training maneki went on his first hollow hunt.

On the hunter maneki was excited and scared at the same time. As they were looking around for hollows the other quincys told him about karakura town. The town seemed to have lots of spiritual beings. Then as they were all having a good time they saw it. It was a hollow but not just any hollow it was a menos grande. The other quincies told maneki to stay back and they would take care of it.

After a minute of battling all of them were dead and only maneki was left. Maneki was scared because what he had seen the hollow to to his friends but that wasnt gonna let that stop him. Maneki summoned up his bow and fired 20 rapid shots at the hollows head. The hollow appeared to have not even noticed it. Maneki then tried something else he grabbed Seele Schneider and charged at the menos.He used Hirenkyaku and was on top of the menos head and then stabbed Seele Schneider into. The blow immediately killed menos but his friends were still dead. Maneki then began to wander around karakura town killing any hollow he saw.

(Mid 20s arc) It had been 10 years since his friends were killed by that menos. From all his wandering and killing hollows he had learned many new powers and even created a few. Maneki knew now that hew was strong enough to kill most hollows. Maneki had been by himself for a long time now and he started to wonder why he never saw any shinigamis killing hollows. He wondered if shinigamis had just abandoned the town or maybe they were leaving them for the quincys to kill. Either way maneki was starting to developed a dislike for shinigamis. Two weeks later he saw a shinigami watch the soul of a little boy be eaten by a hollow and then killed the hollow. From that day on he hated shinigamis.

RP Sample: (Give an example of how you RP)

It all happened 25 years ago.The village had been in and ongoing war with the village of the cloud.The mist were at a disadvantage in the cloud county since it is home to 3 bijuus.One day the the 3rd mizukage decided to use the fact that the cloud has 3 bijuus to their advantage.He assigned his 3 to[ jonin to capture a bijuu.He decided for them to capture the Houkou since it has great power but will be easier to catch then the others since they know its current location.

The 3 jonin set off to the cloud country to capture the bijuu.The three jonin were manekis father,mother,and their neighbor fred.On the way their they were ambushed by some if the cloud country's ninja.They were able easily defeat them since they are the mizukages elite jonin.Then on the way there they were ambushed again but this time they were happy about it.The one who had ambushed them was the bijuu they were looking for the 5 tailed whale horse.

Fred decided to try and talk the bijuu hoping it would be smart and agree to come without a fight.He said "hello 5 tailed we have come to capture it will save you a lot of pain in you just come without a fight."

The 5 tailed replied by smashing fred in to dust with one of its tails.Manekis parents screamed out in horror that friend had been turned to dust.the 5 tailed then said "foolish humans what makes you think you could beat me anyway."It was then that manekis parents each received the magekyou sharingan.

The beast was now worried he had encountered the magekyou sharingan before.The parents charged into the battle with there new sharingan.The beast was able to counter their attacks.Now the beast made a new element from combining sand and fire called glass element.He fred it as shard the size of kunais.The mom was hit by the glass shard.The wounds weren't fatale but she wouldn't be able to fight anymore.THE father was now made as said at the beast "i will beat you for fred and my wife."Then suddenly black fire fired from his eye at the 5 tailed and started to burn him.THE 5 tailed said "ahhhhhhh it burns make it stop make it sto...."Then the beast passed out.The fathers mission was to bring the beast back now he has to figure out how to get put the fire out he tried concentrating on the fire and mysteriously it went out.HE then went to go help his wife she was okay but couldn't move to much.But she had enough energy to help the father do the body flicker justsu to take the bujuu back to the village.When they got back they needed to find a host as quickly as possible to store the bijuu.The father offered his son as a host and the mizukage agreed to it.After several days the transfer was a success .The son was only one year old but had the power to level a city.The father whispered to his son "starting today you are the villages hero.


(present time)Maneki was sitting in his office and he looked like he was talking to himself but he was actually arguing with the bijuu inside him.The bijuu thought that they should on a mission but maneki said that they had to stay and protect the village.Maneki said to the bijuu "ahh why do you have to be so difficult.He then said "im not the one being difficult you are.The argument ended with them staying in the village.Maneki always had to argue with his bijuu because the bijuu likes action.The following day he told the bijuu that they could have some fun and train and the bijuu was happy.so they went off to the training area.


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Re: powerninjas char

Post by Renjiro Haptism on Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:55 pm

history 6 paragraphs in arc form

rp sample is ok

quincy itself is ok

quincy technqiues arnt ok

darkness blast posted 2 times

shadow arrow sight. you need to say for how long and why they go temp blind and how it does it.

All your distructive arrow techniques need to have exactly how strong they are kido ranking wise. just saying it so strong it can destroy a house or something wont do as a byakuari could do that easily and thats a kido rank level 4.

After youve editted that i or another mod will look over it

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Re: powerninjas char

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:06 pm

Renji. FFS. I KNOW you have that PM. Follow it.

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Re: powerninjas char

Post by powerninja on Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:40 pm

fixed

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Re: powerninjas char

Post by Kenji Akira on Wed Dec 30, 2009 3:25 pm

WAY more on looks, I mean like unless you have a picture, 5 lines at least on that.

Same with personality, least 5
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Post by powerninja on Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:06 pm

fixed

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Re: powerninjas char

Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:35 am

Description: Manekis bow fires arrows at a very fast speed.

How fast is very fast?
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Post by powerninja on Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:08 am

fixed

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Re: powerninjas char

Post by powerninja on Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:19 pm

bump

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Post by Aki on Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:49 pm

down it to 70 mph
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Re: powerninjas char

Post by Kenji Akira on Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:55 pm

Also, Seele Schneider is more of a Rank 5 Quincy thing seeing as (To my knowledge) Uryu didn't use that until he was about Captain level.
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Post by powerninja on Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:20 pm

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Post by DewBunny on Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:32 pm

Name: (Shadow arrow blast)
Description: (This special technique gives manekis arrows the power to explode on contact ) kido lv 25

you need cooldowns and stamina drains

Name: (Shadow arrow sight)
Description: (this is another arrow power that allows manekis arrows to cause temporary blindness after 5 of his arrows hit the target.Useing the power of darkness the arros blind whoever is hir for 2 posts.) kido lv 30

kidou level needs to be higher and this need tos affect different levels with different lengths (captain one post, VC two etc)

Name: (Darkness blast)
Description: (this move fire 1 fast but powerful arrow that are capable of destroying building.The draw back is that your bow dispels for a while (2 posts) The arrow is the size of a kamehameha it is stronger at night and weaker at day. kido lv 60

You need a charge time here. anything strong enough to forcibly dispell your bow has to be charged. also you need a stamina drain and number of times this can be used per battle

Fix all of that for starters and if you're remaining Rank four which is a captain class you need more history

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Post by powerninja on Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:55 pm

fixed

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Post by Kenji Akira on Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:21 pm

Bow Manifestation: It looks like an average bow. Except its color is pure black and so is the strong.

Need more to work with or a picture, treat it like your appearance

Description: Manekis bow fires arrows at a very fast speed (70 mph)

Take out the mph cause it gets a bit confusing (Trust me), keep in mind that if your arrow is fast, it won't be that strong

When maneki has his bow active it looks like he is batman. His clothes change from a kimono to a black quincy clothes with a cape.

Again, more description or a picture.
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Post by powerninja on Fri Mar 19, 2010 4:29 pm

finished

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