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Third Alice

Post by Kyouichi on Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:13 pm

Name of Character: Kyouichi Utsume

Current Rank: Rank 5 Quincy

Current Spiritual Pressure: 204

User of Techn: Kyouichi Utsume

Name Of Techn: The Third Alice

Tech Skill Level: medium / hard



Summary:
Kyouichi fires a almost transparent arrow (you could easily see it’s outlines), when Kyouichi commands the arrow to open, it shatters and turns into a wall, the technique first looks like Bakudo #81 but instead of it being able to block Hado spells up to 89, it can only block Hado spells up to #64. The first appearance of the technique looks to be a wall in which it creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall that’s used for defending against the Hado spells, it also has the unique ability to transform into a box when the enemy is near to try to capture them inside. If the enemy is captured inside the box Kyouichi has the choice to have the box harm them while they are inside the box the walls will produce sound waves, or better put a high frequency to attack the enemy’s ears which is possible to pop their eardrums, and if they are in there for too long (up to the second post if they haven’t broken out yet or Kyouichi didn’t let them out, it could make their ears bleed) while they are inside the box.

Note: the technique is two in one, it is able to block and if the enemy is to close to the wall, Kyouichi is able to control the wall to transform into a box to try to capture them inside it, Kyouichi is able to also put himself inside the box, to defend himself against techniques that come from multiple side’s.

Description: The Third Alice is able to block hado spells up to 64, but that’s only for when it is in the wall form, when the inside of the box is only able to defend against hado spells up to 32, meaning if an enemy is inside of the box usually the only way to break out of it is to use a hado spell above 32, or rapid and multiple attacks to the inside of the box or just something powerful to break out.

The technique has a cool down after each use, it takes him 3 posts to be able to use the technique again, if a enemy is unable to break out of the box, they will be trapped inside for only two post, during which if the technique is still activated Kyouichi would have to wait till the technique is gone (whether its his choice, or the box is broken), before using it again. Kyouichi can only use this technique 3 times per topic. If an enemy gets trapped inside the box, they are only kept inside for 2 post, before the box dissapears releasing them.

History: The Third Alice is just apart of the original Third Alice, from the 5 Alice’s (meaning there are 5 other techniques with the name Alice in them), it was developed to defend them selves against projectile attacks, or long range spells, only later was it discovered that it could turn into a box to try to capture the opponent, after that part was discovered, quincy’s used it to try to capture and torture an enemy’s for information, but it’s origins of whether or not it was the quincy’s that developed the Alice’s or this technique remains a mystery, not one quincy has been recorded to use any of them, or wield them for that matter, there are records that show how to learn them, but they were mostly in riddles and it is unknown how Kyouichi learn how to use a part of the Third Alice’s power, or he just wont reveal it.

Side Note: When the wall is up its able to stand up to and up to #64 Hado skills, but when it transforms into the box form it become’s weaker, it could only stand up to #32 Hado in this form if the enemy is caught, meaning its possible for an enemy to dodge it and possible to avoid the box when it tries to capture them (it can only capture them if they are standing still).

Second Note: When its in the wall form it could smash into the enemy (since when the arrow explodes it transforms into the wall, its only natural that will keep going in the direction it was fired)before it dissolves into the air, it is immpossible for Kyouichi to use the box form when it's used like this.

Third Note: if the technique is just used to block, but not to capture, it will disappear after its blocked what it just blocked, but Kyouichi still has to wait three cool down post to use the technique again.

Added Note: The wall form only last for one post long enough to block the attack thats coming at him.

OOC: I still need to know if i can get this one checked at because i never got an ok or respone from kou


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Re: Third Alice

Post by Taichou on Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:28 pm

Kyouichi commands the arrow to open, it shatters and turns into a wall, the technique first looks like Bakudo #81 but instead of it being able to block Hado spells up to 89, it can only block Hado spells up to #64.

How long can it block the spells? How long can it stay out in the surface as a wall.

it also has the unique ability to transform into a box when the enemy is near to try to capture them inside. If the enemy is captured inside the box Kyouichi has the choice to have the box harm them while they are inside the box the walls will produce sound waves, or better put a high frequency to attack the enemy’s ears which is possible to pop their eardrums, and if they are in there for too long (up to the second post if they haven’t broken out yet or Kyouichi didn’t let them out, it could make their ears bleed) while they are inside the box.

I don't have any problems with this, but the problem is that you have to only wait two posts so you can use it again. I suggest making it longer, as it seems to be really powerful.
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Re: Third Alice

Post by Kyouichi on Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:01 pm

The wall only stays up for one post, unless they are trpated inside when its turned into the box form , and i can have it be a 3 for the wall form and if I use the box it take 5 posts cooldown to use it again.
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Re: Third Alice

Post by Taichou on Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:47 am

Okay. As it seems to be powerful, but fitting for a Level 5 Quincy, I'll recommend a 1000 words RP of this. It's usually 500, but adding the other type of form, I'll let it go by 1000. Fine with you?
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Re: Third Alice

Post by Kyouichi on Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:45 pm

yeah its fine
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Re: Third Alice

Post by Taichou on Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:48 pm

APPROVED.

After finishing the training topic, post it in the Complete Center.
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