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Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:09 pm

Technique name: Eclipse

Technique effect: this technique causes an eclipse to occur over the sun and or moon. (which ever one is in the sky at the time.) Gray then focuses his reitsu to form a mask made of reitsu and Shadows which gives him a stat boost of 20 to speed and of 10 to strangth. when the shikai is activated Gray's power over fear is Monumently Stronger and the pentical moon dance technique fires more powerfull blades of shadow. so on when the Bankai is activated the great beast has a silver Demonic aura around it that if the opponent tuches it they feel unimaginable fear (same goes for if the opposeing Zon-pok-tou touches the aura then the spirit of that sword will feel the fear aswell.) also when the technique OniGetsu is used the outfit gray gets changes to this

but with the skin black like that of a 3D silhouette.

Character looks: The character is turned into a 3D silhouette of himself but his clothes are left normal.

Weakness: on post 8 of 10 Gray losses control of his body to a alternate personality who only wants to kill every hollow and Arrancar in the univirse but after post 10 when the tech needs to goin to recharge then gray is knocked out or sivierly hurt.

(10 posts, 10 posts recharge)


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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Sora on Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:18 pm

Unacceptable. Bankai alone is just a 20+ stat boost altogether, so for it to be 30 each in Shikai is just impossible. I think Shikai is a 10+ stat boost altogether, but I'm not 100% sure. But I know Bankai is a 20+ boost altogether. Distribute them accordingly, please.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:44 pm

What he has said can't be put in any other words; perfect. Make it reasonable with the stat increase; actually, keep it at 20, I'm not going to negotiate on this. And, might I say, the light idea can only be natural, any other light(like my own Tamatenshi) may NOT be extinguished. So, what I mean by the 20 stat points is that you may shift your original Bankai increase, any other than that will result in this being denied. Follow the given criteria and edit it.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:31 pm

guys just for referancing here uhm its not a bankai its an aditionaltech which increases the power boost of the bankai. also its a stat boost in normal and shikai as exactly that a stat booster.

im not completely sure that its completely wrong to say it but the tech it not that op in anyway and also the light extinguishing aspect . it only does this till my bankai has formed because it releases my reitsu over the mile radius to block out the light storta like a really thick fog but its just power.

and also the boost are completely septarit from my skikai and my bankai.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:27 am

bankai remains at +20. No additional techniques increase the bankais gain. Yes there are techniques that increase stats, but they are just that. Not related to Bankai or shikai.

Stat boost of 10 to each stat when in shikai or normal.

That is a +40 increase for shikai. Unallowed. Kuroda is the only one with this, and that is special reasons.

total stat boost of 20 for speed and strength.

This also increase Bankai power by 20, giving the Bankai bonus +40 total. Unallowed.

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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:26 am

the tech has nothing to do with my bankai other then it makes it maximum powerlevel. i guess i still dont know enough about this but can you tell me wat it is i can increase the stats to?
and as for the shikai i just say that as to make the point that i can use it in shikai this tech has nothing to do with the effect of my shikai other then increase the power i can use.

i'll edit it to in normal and shikai the increase to speed only is 10.

and the bankai the increase in speed is only 20. the bankai effect of the state boost is still going to be in effect tho . meaning that the tech does not effect the bankai boost but it still adds to the boost in stats vea its own effect.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by xXLightxDarkXx on Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:33 pm

Usually it is 20 overall for Bankai; I'll let Jetsu take care of this.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:03 pm

just repeatng my self here but it's not the bankai boost.

its a boost all its own.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Nakki on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:08 pm

10 Stat boost is too much for a shikai bonus, even though it's only distributed on speed.

As for, Kou has been reviewing this at first. So I'll pass it to him.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:11 pm

im going to re edit the intire tech.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:27 pm

done
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Taichou on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:28 pm

How long does the stat boost last and time to recharge?
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Taichou on Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:55 pm

Approved.

Seoncd approval, from Kou is needed though.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:00 pm

just added a weakness.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Taichou on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:02 pm

Approved again.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:05 pm

Change the description again. The mask is too much like a Vaizard mask.

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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:08 pm

k ... can i make it a helmet then?
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:12 pm

Fine.

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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:12 pm

.. wait i have an other idea.
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Re: eclipse for Gray- Getsumaru

Post by Gray-Getsumaru on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:16 pm

done i've fixed it. what you think Kou-sensai
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