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Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:50 pm

Basic Information

Name: Clous Sinota

Age: Appears to be 18 actuall 68

Gender: Male

Division: 8

Seat: Captain

Looks:
Appearance::
Clous has white hair, with athletic features. He's about 5'10. Along with the regular shinigami uniform, Clous wears two black bracers on both of his wrist. he also wears a White sleeveless haori, its just like a captains except instead of a division emblem on its back there is the Sinota family crest which is a single swirling dragon. Clous usually has this buttoned up.


Personality: Clous seems to be cold hearted. Most of the time he acts as if he doesn't care much for others. But beneath this icy exterior he actually tries his hardest to protect those close to him, those are alos the only ones he expresses himself to. Also his personality concerning Rouge Shinigami, and Vizards are extremely hostile compared to his attitude towards a normal hollow.

Stats
(105 Points)

Strength: 25 /Shikai: 30 /Bankai: 35

Speed: 30 /Shikai: 35 /Bankai: 40
Dijin: 90/ Shikai: 105/ Bankai: 120
Dexterity: 20 /Bankai: 25

Stamina: 30 /Bankai: 35

Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Teletsue

Zanpakuto Looks: :

Zanpakuto Description:

Dijin: Allows Clous to move up to three times his own normal shunpo speed. (it grows with him, the faster he gets the faster Dijin gets.) This ability is not indefinate. While in use with a released state Clous' wings serve as a counter, by desolving in a glowing blue spiritual particle dust. As such this abilty is limited. The max amount of time Clous has been able to sustain is a total of four minutes non-stop. (lets just say six posts i guess) But Clous usually limits this to small bursts of speed when needed. When not used with a release Clous can only use the ability for a short ammount of time given its drain. (three posts)

Strike: Clous gains the ability to convert his spiritual energy into lightning allowing multiple uses in battle.


Released Zanpakuto Description: Crash Donw form the heavens: A black wing grows on his left shoulder, granting Clous limited flight abilities. Also while using Dijin the wing will slowly disintegrate as a time limit of use. Clous' eyes also turn red widening his senses and allowing him to see his enemy no matter what speed they move at. However how fast he reacts to them depends on his own ability to fight
Zanpakuto Release Phrase: Crash Down form the heavens

Released Zanpakuto Looks:

Zanpakuto Spirit: Over all Telitsue has a calm personality. It takes effort for him to get worked up.

Zanpakuto Realm: Its a battle field with fallen warriors and weapons scattered everywhere. At the center of it all is a single ancient Japanese style castle


Bankai Information
Raijin Telitsue:
Bankai Description: The blade opens and reveals its true power. Also these wings do not disintegrate while using Dijin.

Duel With the Clouds: Telitsue takes the form of lightning and fires itself into the sky. from that momment Clous is able to controle the lightning with his mind. He can use his hands, and when he does Telitsue moves twice as fast.

Bankai Looks:

Alterations: Kite is able to fire a strike without much of a limit Two wings (one on either side) grow from Clous' back and gives him improved flight ability.

Kido Information

[Hadô]



#1 [Thrust|Shô] : Pushes target away from caster.
[Incantation] : (Not Specified. Basic Kidô.)

#4 [White Thunder|Byakurai] : Fires a thin bolt of lightning from the caster's fingertips, piercing the subject. This is considered the most commonly used among all of the Kidô, as it's both fast and efficient. The strength of this varies from person to person.
[Incantation] : (Not Specified. Basic Kidô.)

#31 [Shot of Red Fire|Shakkahô] : Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
[Incantation] : Ye Lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, The sea barrier surges, March on to the south!

#33 [Blue Fire, Crash Down|Sôkatsui] : Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31 Shot of Red Fire, but over a wider area and with more power.
[Incantation] : Ye Lord! Mask of flesh and bone, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, Upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws!

#54 [Abolishing Flames|Haien] : Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact.
[Incantation] : (Not Specified. Advanced Kidô.)

#63 [Thunder Roar Cannon|Raikôhô] : Fires a massive wave of yellow energy at a target.
[Incantation] : Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become the calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!

#63 [Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down|Sôren sôkatsui] : This spell fires two shots of blue fire with greater potency than the single-shot variety. This spell is equally as difficult to cast and control as Raikôhô, therefore they both share the same number.
[Incantation] : Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens.

#88 [Flying Dragon Striking, Heaven-Shaking, Lightning Cannon|Hiryûgeki Zoku Shinten Raihô] : Fires a massive blast of spiritual energy similar to that of a laser.
[Incantation] : (Not specified. Advanced Kidô.)

#91 [Black Coffin|Kurohitsugi] : Forms a box of black energy around a target, which is then pierced by dozens of energy "spears", lacerating the one inside from head to toe.
[Incantation] : (Not specified. Elite Captain Kidô.)





[Bakudô]



#1 [Restrain|Sai] : Locks the target’s arms in place behind their back.
Incantation : (Not specified. Basic Kidô.)

#4 [Crawling Rope|Hainawa] : A rope made of energy that can be forged to bind the target.
[Incantation] : (Not specified. Basic Kidô.)

#9 [Strike|Geki] : Engulfs the target in a thick Reiatsu making it impossible to move.
[Incantation] : Disintegrate, you black dog of Rondanini! Look upon yourself with horror and then claw out your own throat!

#58 [Summoning of Tracking Sparrows|Kakushitsuijaku] : Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude.
[Incantation] : Heart of the south, eye of the north, finger of the west, foot of the east, arrive with the wind and depart with the rain.

#61 [Six Rods Prison of Light|Rikujôkôrô] : Summons six thin, but wide, beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place.
[Incantation] : Carriage of thunder. Bridge of a spinning wheel. With light, divide this into six.

#63 [Chainlike Desert|Sajô Sabaku] : Target is wrapped next to toe in a thick chain.
[Incantation] : (Not Specified. Advanced Kidô.)

#75 [Quintet of One Ton Iron Pillars|Gochûtekkan] : Summons five incredibly tall and thick pillars to pin a target to the ground.
[Incantation] : Walls of iron sand, a priestly pagoda, glowing ironclad fireflies. Standing upright, silent to the end.

#77 [Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air|Tenteikûra] : Transmits messages to anyone within Soul Society. In addition to reciting the spell, the user must draw specific markings on their arms, which are animated by the spell to convey the messages.
[Incantation] : Black and white net. Twenty-two bridges, sixty-six crowns and belts. Footprints, distant thunder, sharp peak, engulfing land, hidden in the night, sea of clouds, blue line. Form a circle and fly through the heavens.

#81 [Splitting Void|Dankû] : Creates a rectangular wall with the use of spiritual energy to protect oneself with. It capable to deflect spells up to #89.
[Incantation] : (Not specified. Advanced Kidô.)

#99 Part 1 [Seal|Kin] : Tightly binds and wraps the target in spiritual fabric and cloth to heavily restrict movement.
[Incantation] : First Song: Halting fabric.

#99 Part 2 [Great Seal|Bankin] : Long blades tear through the target, impaling their body like a pin cushion.
[Incantation] : Second Song: Hundred linked bolts.

#99 Part 3 [Final Seal|Bankin] : Smashes the target with an immense metal cube.
[Incantation] : Final Song: Great seal of 10,000 forbiddings.


History and RP Sample

History: Over all it is easily noted that Clous is of a noble lineage. He grew up in a family of shinigami, being the offspring of two talented warriors allot what expected from him. After a while his parents were well weaved into the soul society, and now Clous was attending the academy. It was close to graduation date, Clous was ready for his future roles and seemed to be a normal guy with dreams of his own. But it seems tragedy always likes to strike at those moments. It was quickly revealed to Clous that his parents were killed in action by a rouge shinigami. From that day forward Clous seemed to change completely. He separated himself from his friends, he became intent on finding the rouge shinigmi and end his life. Even though it went again everything his parents taught him.

Clous graduated and joined division six rising through the ranks as he started to get through his missions faster and faster each time. He eventually learned his shikai and started to develop his skills. It was then taht his clan was being challenged for its title. Without the head of the clan present the Sinota clan would be striped of its noble title. He was eventually switched to division eleven where he stayed for less than a month before becoming the lieutenant of division two.

Clous couldn’t allow everything his family had accomplished go to waste. He quickly took the seat at the head of the family name challenging anyone to take it from him. So far no one has done anything to challenge him other than make a few threats. He was later on shuffled around again. It was true that alot of roles were switched around and that there was one hell of a void to fill.

After a few more years it was revealed that the Rouge Shinigami was actually a team mate of his parents who had become a Vizard. Apparently the rouge shinigami had lost his mind after witnessing the death of his allies and lost control of the hollow in himself which was kept secret. He eventually lost control over it and killed Clous' parents. Clous still didn’t view it as "good enough for him". It was just an excuse, if he ever found the man he would kill him.

Once again Clous was shuffled around, but this time it came with a promotion, as the captain of Division three. He went on with this possition for a short while. Given the almost unlicky streak this division has had with captains Closu learned to walk on thin ice. he eventually gained teh trust of his division and worked with them to keep order.

Within less than a year Clous' short term as the Captain of Division three came to an end, he was transferred and sent to head up Division six as the new captain. His duties havnt changed much. He still likes to keep a close relationship with division two on occasion. He spends his time now settling into his new position. However even that was cut short as Clous was once again transferred to the Eight division.

RP Sample: The Vizard looked up at the shinigami with a devilish grin on his face. "Maybe I decided your not worth killing. But then again neither were your parents. They were simply entertainment boy, and your no different!" The fallen man started to laugh manically as Clous raised his Zanpakuto. "You filth, I'll end you now!" Clous brought the sword down on the Vizards skull killing him instantly.

After a few minutes of reflecting on what he had done, Clous fell to the floor. He was disgusted with himself. His parents always taught him to never seek revenge. But he did and now he knows why he shouldn’t have. Fighting with only anger will cause someone to change into a monster. But Clous felt as if he was no longer worthy of anything, like the lowest piece of dirt on earth. Shouldn't I be happy? Why do I feel so empty?


Last edited by Clous on Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:42 pm; edited 20 times in total
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:59 pm

slight edit...complete

let me know If I need to fix anything.
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Lark on Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:37 pm

Ok mate your Zanpakuto needs a Release Phrase

Do you know we can Fly without wings... so your Banki is kinda Useless

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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:39 pm

Well the wings are mroe for looks anyway...

Stats have been edited

and I forgot the release..mybad I'll get that
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Lark on Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:28 pm

Ok looks good just need to add the Phrase and were good to go.
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:19 pm

It's there already..if you want I'll seperate them for you XD
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Lark on Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:28 pm

Ok looks Good Approved.
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:21 pm

K I've edited to add some form of a time skip, and tried to explain his new possition. Hell I've even added a few more parragraphs XP
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Taichou on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:25 pm

You didn't need to, but oh well...

By the way, as a captain you should have a longer RP sample.
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Renjiro Haptism on Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:32 pm

All kido and gear and stuff like that needs to be removed and added to it request center part. all that should be here is character info zanpakutou info and history and rp sample

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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:53 pm

uh huh..K I'll do that....eh wth? now im 6th???? O.o
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:53 am

Yea, your sixth. Dont worry about doing that reediting for that, although your Dijin skill needs to have a length and a cooldown. Being able to move 3x your normal speed, for an indefinite amount of time is not allowed.

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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:27 pm

Sorry Kou, thought I did that already. Anyway there you go.
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Koujetsu Hanagayu on Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:47 pm

XD, Do me a favor and convert minutes to posts.

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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:06 pm

Good point *edits* ^ ^'
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:37 pm

*bump

K its all done
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:18 pm

M'kay, bump and edit for Div 8 captain I guess
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Clous on Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:47 pm

*bump
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Re: Clous Sinota [8th Division Captain]

Post by Lee on Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:14 am

Approved, buddy. ^^
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